Magickous, your guy could be a traitor to the demons, but in another way than you might expect Can't say anything more because then I'd have some major SPOILER ALERTS Thanks, by the way
Oh my G-D! I ******* LOVE YOU! Omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg! I love it how my character is introduced! Plus the effect of the blurry air around his form, plus the momentary seizures. I also hate you so much because you're making us wait until next chapter!
Make sure that you don't forget the seizure thing later, otherwise it will ruin the point of being a shapeshifter because my character will be too overpowered. Also, don't make it TOO clichéd by the times he gets seizures...
Don't make it always: "Visceral! I need you so that we can kill the bad guys and complete our mission! (lol.) Oh no! Visceral HAPPENS to be spasming RIGHT NOW! Oh noes!"
Just posted a draft of the Nayda-map on the story-thread Tell me what you think here, so I can make the finalized version as good as it can be Hugs, Sophie.