Taken Away - FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 12, 2011.

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  1. Thanks, by the way 
     
    #61 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 13, 2011
  2. I'm okie dokie.

    ELDER BACHELOR DRAGON.
     
    #62 *Utho (01), Aug 20, 2011
  3. Hahah, okay Elder Bachelor Dragon 
     
    #63 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 20, 2011
  4. New chapter tomorrow!
     
    #64 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 20, 2011
  5. yay
     
    #65 *Magickous (01), Aug 21, 2011
  6. Okay, there's a chapter tomorrow instead. Why? My iPad ran out of battery and I write my stuff on it. I can't wait for it to charge and finish writing, because we're having guests over. Sorry 
     
    #66 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 21, 2011
  7. Can't find it... Did you post a new one? :O
     
    #67 blablablaxx, Aug 24, 2011
  8. Thank school for me not posting 
    I've been really busy, but I'll HOPEFULLY get a chapter up today, since we have a short day today.
    Also, do you want to have a map of the region (Nayda)? If so, I can try to make one 
    School is really making me busy now, so updates will be less frequent.
    Thanks for sticking to the story despite this and I love you all 
     
    #68 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 25, 2011
  9. :D
     
    #69 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 25, 2011
  10. MOAR!





    It's awesome though. You rock man/woman!
     
    #70 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 25, 2011
  11. Hahah, thanks :)

    I'm a girl, by the way :p
     
    #71 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 25, 2011
  12. Well, your main character is a girl... So I guess so.


    Nice story, it moves amazingly smoothly and doesn't get bland.

    You're professional :D
     
    #72 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 25, 2011
  13. And yes, to Princess_Elf, Aranel is you if you were wondering :)
     
    #73 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 25, 2011
  14. Thank you sooo much :D
     
    #74 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 25, 2011
  15. ;)
     
    #75 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 25, 2011
  16. Wow! Love it! It's so amazing, and so well-written!
     
    #76 blablablaxx, Aug 26, 2011
  17. can my demon guy be a traitor?
     
    #77 *Magickous (01), Aug 26, 2011
  18. to the demons
     
    #78 *Magickous (01), Aug 26, 2011
  19. I wish I could be called professional...

    *takes anti-inferiority meds*
     
    #79 cheesemuffin, Aug 26, 2011
  20. But cheese, you ARE professional in your writing 
     
    #80 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 26, 2011
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