Taken Away - FEEDBACK

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 12, 2011.

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  1. Thanks 
     
    #21 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 23, 2011
  2. Awesome chap!
     
    #22 Allioss, Jul 24, 2011
  3. Nice :) too bad Fenix died already :(
     
    #23 Tantilus, Jul 24, 2011
  4. Thanks  I liked Fenix, but I didn't really know where to put him :/ He'll be mentioned again later, just so you know 
     
    #24 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 24, 2011
  5. Aw. His time in the story was less then half a chapter.
     
    #25 Tantilus, Jul 24, 2011
  6. He got killed so easily :(

    He should get resurrected :)
     
    #26 Tantilus, Jul 24, 2011
  7. I'll take your opinion to consideration 
     
    #27 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 24, 2011
  8. Thanks!
     
    #28 Tantilus, Jul 24, 2011
  9. You're welcome  I try to listen to feedback as good as I can 
     
    #29 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 24, 2011
  10. New chapter up!
     
    #30 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 24, 2011
  11. It's awesome! One of my favorites!
     
    #31 *camotan12 (01), Jul 24, 2011
  12. Thanks a lot
     
    #32 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 24, 2011
  13. great chapter
     
    #33 Storallelite, Jul 24, 2011
  14. Very suspenseful chapter
     
    #34 Allioss, Jul 25, 2011
  15. Awesome chapters 
     
    #35 PrincessElf, Jul 25, 2011
  16. Thanks to you all 
     
    #36 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 25, 2011
  17. When's next chapter?
     
    #37 Tantilus, Jul 27, 2011
  18. Today or tomorrow, I've been really busy.
     
    #38 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 28, 2011
  19. Like it alot
     
    #39 *Magickous (01), Jul 29, 2011
  20. 

    7 THUMBS UP
     
    #40 *Utho (01), Jul 29, 2011
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