Evan we dont like each other I still think u should carry on cuz it's awesome and don't listen to her she just being like a nerd
I didn't say you shouldn't continue to post it. Quite frankly it's better than most peoples' stories, but I was stating my honest opinion. I know that you said my story didn't make sense, if you would post some reasons why, then I would be happy to clarify/put some hints in my next chapter. The reason I posted all that was because I personally hate it when people post critical things without explaining themselves. I am completely open to criticism, and I am always doing all I can to improve my writing in every way. If you can't take a critical comment every once in a while, than you shouldn't go into the arts.
That's all very well ^, but you didn't need to list so many things. I'm sensitive, I've been told, and I know I am. Maybe too much for my own good. And writing began to be a bit of a chore. I wasnt looking forward to it. That's why I stopped. However, soon I will be signing up to a different app on iPod/iPhone, and it's on the internet too. I will be posting my story again on there, only setting it in modern. I'll tell you when I am. Love u all
I'm not spamming or using excessive profanity. Still, I'll respect your wishes and refrain from posting.
Queen, I can see that Mystique was honestly trying to help, but I can't see why you cant understand it. This place is a writing community, and the purpose of a feedback thread is to let you know what others think about your story. My suggestion is that if you can't handle criticism, don't write. However, Im not telling you to refrain from writing, but you should learn how to use criticism to your advantage to make your story better. If you think that was offensive, you should see what some people wrote in the original innocence feedback page, or in the secret keeper feedback page. What Mystique wrote was actually very polite and respectful, and i really don't think you should be yelling at her. Also, what you wrote on her was was completely disrespectful and not necessary. You really ought to think about apologizing. Thanks for reading, I hope it gave you something to think about. -Irin
OK EVERYONE, I'VE MADE UP MY MIND. IM NOT CONTINUING. SO THERE'S REALLY NO POINT IN CONTINUING TO POST HERE. And Irin, frankly, I really couldnt care less.
OK EVERYONE, IM NOT CONTINUING. SO THERE'S REALLY NO POINT IN POSTING HERE. And Irin, frankly, I really couldn't care less
Funny you should mention that. I was just about to post...but seeing how your so accusatory, maybe I should wait for a bit...-insert evil grin-
Ive noticed that u stopped as soon as u got your first piece of negative criticism. I'm not the great of a writer either but whenever I get negative criticism I try to use it to improve my own writing. I know there are people better then me out there who I can learn from. Of course If you get too much negative you don't wanna write anymore, I've been there. I haven't read too much of your story but there's room for improvement, you should continue because the only way to get better is to write. Btw are you from Toronto Ontario?