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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *PythonX (01), Sep 27, 2010.

  1. i might as well put my art to use.

    i dont really want a main character
    but i can write bios 4 u
     
  2. Hey Marian u got it first for that u get a cookie, a burger, and a puppy named Simon
     
  3. Kimber u know the sneak peak on page 2 that's the peron I 'sacrafice' for that's all hints bout story gd nite
     
  4. @Angus I Dunoon wat u cud do
     
  5. if i have a character. i normally be
    race:dragon
    name:the shdow
    apperence:dark black scales that reflect. the light. sharp claws and spines. wings are strong for long flights
    gender:male
    age:783
    personality: protects everyone loyal to the.....
    Bio
    born in a cave when the time of dragons they ruled the land by power and brute force. everyone feared them they fled inside when one flyed over there town untill a army of assasains where hired appearing from ally ways and every corner and were called to the captials castle where the king meet them. he told them thats his spy had found the dragons liar and from that spot the dragons where wiped out and only a male called tge shadow. son of the dragons elder. he was wise and had been the last to due in the great battle and hundered stood between him and were killed untill a sword was thrown and pieced his eye and emplained itself tin the skull slowy killing the dragon but his children escaped and maybe a female escaped so they could get the dragons back but the shadow is only protected by his friends and is in danger because everyone remembers the folk tails of the dragons so they want to kill him but how will the last one of the dragons help them come back to rule the land like the old days


    info dragons live 4 around 4000 years and the shadow us young


    i might wrire another one but if u can use it. if u cant dont.
     
  6. Can I change that slightly to a dragon disguised as a human
     
  7. Anyway gd nite finally
     
  8. Name:pyro
    Gender:Male
    Age:unknown looks about 20.
    Apparance:Red eyes,black hair,tall,wears an old brown cape,a brown hood, a leather vest and has lots of scars all over his body from training.
    Powers:He is able to manipulate fire at his desire.He is also able to manipulate the Chao'Dar(fire of the darkness) whitch is the fire of hell that looks like a blue gaz and is 10 times more powerfull and difficult to estinguish.
    Personality:Brave,perseverent,short tempered,calm and sometimes very violent.
     
  9. He can be as good as he can be evil.
     
  10. Is this too late??
     
  11. like dragon desguised as human
     
  12. Lol I lost my iPhone soz...
    Can someone bump the story up for me please
     
  13. I'll start chapter 1 now
     
  14. ........it done yet?
     
  15. Yum cookie!  yum hamburger!  cute simon puppy! 