Story

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by geoff_the_penguin, Oct 22, 2015.

  1. This work of fiction does not necessarily represent my political views or any other views that may be associated with this story.




    Long long ago in a galaxy far far away.

    There was a peaceful planet upon which everyone and everything got along peacefully and in perfect harmony. No one hungered, no one desired, no one was poor and everyone was equal. As you may have already guessed these people were socialists.

    But one day a terrible force came along, it corrupted everything in its path. This force was called capitalism. It causes suffering, destruction, hunger and death. It was a machine that consumed everything in its path and showed no restraint.

    There was a long and bitter conflict which still rages to this very day.
     
  2. What the hell was that?
     
  3. Sounds like a perfect planet how do I get there?
     
  4. Look OP is a mindless zombie. All hail socialism where I can do nothing and live like everyone's equal.
     
  5. Socialism - where hard work and personal ambition go to die. Let's implement socialism in KAW! Let's equally divide lands, buildings, and gold amongst all the players and keep it that way! I wonder how long this game will last.
     
  6. It's official! Kim Jong Un plays KaW!
     
  7.  
  8. 2/5. The ending was predictable with terrible character devolpement.
     
  9. Should I rewrite it with actual characters to allow for character development and add an inconclusive ending so I can write more of this then?
     
  10. You should just go away, permanently
     
  11. Cool story, bro.



    It sucks crap.
     
  12. socialism is key to survival noob
     
  13. Wow then it's a miracle that the majority of the western world arent socialists and we are still breathing!
     
  14. If you aren't a socialist by the time you're 20 you have no heart. If you aren't a nationalist by the time you're 40 you have no brain. Pretty sure that's a quotation.
     
  15. I have no heart.
     
  16. Nor do I.
     
  17. Actually I think it's something like "If you're not a communist by the time you're 20 there's something wrong with you, if you're still a communist by the time you're 40 there's definetly something wrong with you."
     
  18. Geoff! Stop spreading propaganda and making penguins look bad.
     
  19. What a wonderful idea! Let's all hold hands & sing campfire songs now