Some thoughts and feelings

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by xx-daTomoT-xx, Sep 29, 2010.

  1.  with theese shoes 
     
  2. Another of mine ;

    You may be gone,
    But we are now one.
    You're still here in my head,
    A guardian angel above my bed.
    We can still fly,
    Like we will never die.
    I miss holding you, 
    And feeling your heartbeat too.
    But those are just material, 
    our love is unconditional.
    I won't forget you, 
    I love you.
     
  3. Boooooo! just kidding its good
     
  4. oh yea dat the clan is great but i want my own to get the achievements :)
     
  5. It's good, but some of the rhymes felt kinda forced. The other one is still my favorite!
     
  6. Very nice dat... Don't listen to those who attempt to put you down. It takes strength and courage to post your works here. I commend you for this. Again. Good job with these
     
  7. Here is some advice. Poems do not have to ryhme. Let it flow from your feelings, don't force it to be consecutive. Be yourself, be original
     
  8. I feel underappreciated for my talents in KaW and especially in real life
     
  9. Conq, I appriciate your talents here
     
  10. Thank you colonial 
    Thanks for advice Marian 

    Mina what sort of talents are they?
     
  11. Writing, imagination, knowledge of many things, and the talent of giving advice. I give advice on this website where people ask questions. Every one of my answers have been rated. The highest rating you can get is 3 and after answering about 500 questions, my average rating is about 2.89
     
  12. Well maybe you should try your skills like imagination in a different field? Like I haven't really looked into poetry before, but I've realised I quite like it.
     
  13. I'm writing a damn novel. I even posted the first five chapters here but nobody reads them. I'm drowned in jealously of other people. I have about 50 ideas for books, comics, and/or movies. But I have nowhere to start and no one would take me seriously. I even have a way of saving pirates of the Caribbean 4 but I'm too late
     
  14. Yeah. Release date came out. Which is sad considering it's only been 4 months of filming. It's gonna suck though considering what will be missing and what will be added
     
  15. They've gone too far with the movie...
     
  16. I need to get in touch with Johnny depp or Rob marshall. I'm avoiding Penelope Cruz cuz I want her out of the movie
     
  17. We live,
    We laugh,
    We love,
    We die,
    Not necessarily in that order.
    Some of it gets lost on the way,
    But no matter how long we are together,
    I will love you.

    Not really a poem. Just wanted to write it