Regurgitate the aftermeal of profundity the smell of incompetence pervades the ionosphere that is YOU YOU bring this raging down a fallen angel burning away hypocrisy YOU cannot deny the life ends at logoff your addiction stands unchecked
First let me say, if that's supposed to be a sentence or a paragraph, honestly I cannot tell. There is no punctuation. When writing poems, essays, whatever. Punctuation is critical.
I'll bump it for you: Bumpster Your poems are delightful, thought I'd share one of mine. I write poems in so many languages so sorry if my english is a bit off. A Special Word by Fiddler A special word between you and me, A unique bond one cannot see, It’s wrapped up tight in its embrace. For the bond between our love won’t break. Its light shall shine on the darkest days, A light so bright others quake in its wake, Our love will hold in our grasp, As we walk the world with a silent breath. Happiness to hold, Love to keep, I see the stars waiting to be breached....
Damn...this is...really suprising and nice to see still alive.. PS; Hey Colonial, long time no see. Here's just a small writing to keep this pace going: Crawl Into my heart And save me from falling apart For you are my saving From that which I am craving.
Assassin My face stays covered by my hood inside an assassin.. It was in your neighborhood was it covered by you? When it fled from roof to roof did you not hear it’s feet stamping all around you? Did you feel the heart breaks this assassin has maned? Did you feel the knives strength.. why not slide your hand across the blade..? Feel the blood beneath your feet Feel your body die like sheath You were nothing in this town but the clotheslines simply laying down blowing swiftly while I lept From house to house the assassin bounced Bodies and Bodies bled and seeped through the ground blood trickled right to it’s hell Misfortunes stolen from you It was you I was looking for yet many others took it from- for you Tell me how an assassin of such strength cannot get to someone as wicked as you? How many more assassins do I need to do? How many more do I have to hurt for you to get what’s coming? For you to get what’s right? This blade will answer you and I.. quit hiding alright?
I would put on of my timeless classics as "Butthurt Noob", Abut the kawforumunity seems to reject me.
Bumping this due to seeing different threads like these being made. Might as well write a poem while I bump this I looked at the staircase fear awoke inside I saw only black no lights arise the corner seems so far the turning is so close what is behind that corner no one will ever know. here i'll do another Nobody sees you nobody cares you’re just somebody over there what’s so great about this one because you're somebody and they’re no one They came off the top of my head, from the state of mood I'm in- so they might seem lame. But hey, it is what it is. :?