Some of my poems and thought

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.

  1. :lol: lol
     
  2. These poems are amazing, and so true. If only the masses have heard of Christianity, the world might be more cohesive.
     
  3. These poems are too damn long
     
  4. I find it kind of funny.
    I find it kind of sad.
    The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had.
     
  5. :D Had to bump for a friend
     
  6. You changed your name back! Good to still see you around Col.

    I read the first two poems, i liked the first one a lot.
     
  7. I'm rather inconsistent. Lol
     
  8. The years go past in a blur
    While my memories remain
    My thoughts forever change
    Why is replaced with what if?
    What if with how?
    How to Why?
    Its a circle of emotion and denial
    relisation and acceptance.
    My heart breaks for what is gone
    My world collapsed
    but my eyes opened slowly.
    Im picking up the pieces
    rebuilding myself
    I will always be your mum
    but now i need to learn to be me
    I need to remember and smile
    Imagine what would be and laugh
    See what was and is..
    And that is, you are always loved
    always missed
    always remembered
    I must look at today not as what should have been
    but what it is
    Today is no longer the day you were due
    its not the day that would have been
    It is the day that is
    The day for me to remember with pride
    and move forward with honour
    Today is our day
     
  9. I lay in a dream
    My leg over yours
    Body held tight against you
    Head on your chest.

    Tears flow freely
    All the past
    All that happens now
    The hurt and pain, Just let go....

    My head hurts
    Heart ripped apart
    Words tumble through my shattered mind
    I ache.

    How can others be so cruel
    To destroy ones hopes
    Dreams
    Pick on what cant be fixed...

    How can i be so stupid
    To let them in
    Time and time again
    To make me so low, shallow, hurt.

    I lay here deep in thought
    Held close to the one i want
    My head says go...
    My heart has given up.
     
  10. Seen as this has turned into a post where everyone is contributing their poems I might as well :D

    Broken

    I feel the deep void
    Where my heart once set
    Remember it all
    But want to forget

    Was this my fate?
    For fate isn't kind
    Replaying the scene
    Over in my mind

    The hopes and the dreams
    Now shattered. No less
    What there might have been...
    He leaves me to guess

    That fateful day
    When those words were spoken
    Leaves me here now
    No less than broken.

    Hope you liked :D
    Wrote this when I was 12.
    Which I still am... :?
     
  11. Nice poem etak and everyone else
     
  12. Agreeing with etak, so:

    I felt happiness,
    I felt joy,
    I felt good,
    And my little brother yelled Ahoy! (He loves pirates)
    I climbed the path,
    Through the wrath,
    Over the trees,
    And in the buzzing bees.
    I truly felt free,
    Free as I'll ever be.
    I felt like I was flying,
    And felt the sun frying me,
    But today I was carefree.