Some of my poems and thought

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.

  1. My attempt at a poem... Here goes..

    Reflection of Duality

    The echoes of thought,
    pounding within my mind.
    Standing on a precipice of past emotion,
    Unabatedly staring at worn, written script,
    whose dark ink had cruelly printed my every decision.
    My faults and flaws glare out at me,
    gnashing it's teeth and gnawing through my body.
    A sudden fear pierces my heart,
    as apprehension of the final lines appear.
    Tears that have run dry start flowing once more,
    Tears which were within me for quite some time.
    Forcefully chained and vaulted in the depths of my heart.
    I finished, and turned the page to see what lay ahead.
    But all I saw was.... Nothing.
    Nothing.....
    Nothing but a blank page with ink and a quill.
    Seemed to me as an endless chasm, an eternal void,
    Yet at the same time a thread of hope.
    Afraid to write, as so much destruction caused,
    Yet yearning to change with a strand of hope.....
     
  2. Very nice D
     
  3. Thanks, :) yours are pretty nice too! :D
     
  4. u should be :oops:
     
  5. no 1 is bad sorry but the rest are good :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :mrgreen:
     
  6. Technically that isn't a poem. That is just a thought I had
     
  7. The first and fourth are more thoughts than poems
     
  8. u are my favorite mod
     
  9. I can't remember if I posted this. And I'm too lazy to check. Lol
     
  10. Trying to think of some wise words, and then realizes; WHAT ARE WISE WORDS? To me, wise words are something you day, and truely believe. Depending of the listeners, and how they inturpret what the meaning is, what you say is wise to them. So next time you talk with someone, whether it's towards a friend, a family member, or a complete stranger, don't try to sound intelligent, be yourself. Who knows, what you say could make a huge difference in someones life. Think about it.
     
  11. Beutiful....... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cool:
     
  12. Just say what comes from the heart... It doesn't have to be witty or clever just express what you think and are feeling, it will show it in the poem naturally through your heart 
     
  13. Wow I haven't read this thread for a long time