Some of my poems and thought

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.

  1. Depressed persons tend to try and hide most of what they're feeling
     
  2. except me. We hide it in real life and sometimes let it out in a game, like me. Then we're hated and if ou're like me you tend to crave attention and drama so everyone hates you as I am doing right now to draw attention to me
     
  3. Hugz anyone?
     
  4. Well, I guess. I didn't really want anyone to know. But I'm all better now, so no worries.
     
  5. Oh ik, Had/having a first hand experience.
     
  6. Wow, that sounded scary even to me. Didn't mean...yikes
     
  7. hate hugs. Never had someone hug me for comfort besides my parents which I hate
     
  8. Wow...I killed the mood...

    Anyone have a happy topic?
     
  9. I think I'm off to get some sleep now. G'night.
     
  10. Night irin
     
  11. I hope u don't mind if I post one of my poems: we humans r nothing more than a cave full of wonders, of secrets, and of shadows. But whom is brave enough to explore deep down into one of these do called caves and discover all of it's secrets. And long after entering this cave, he discovers the only reason why he is there is the well hidden, prescious treasure called love, which he looks thoroughly for. But it is very hidden and may not b revealed until the one worthy of it has shown up, found it, and sworn solemn oath to care for it. And only then may he have this valuable treasure.
     
  12. I love it kate
     
  13. We are a demanding race
    always moving
    always searching
    asking questions about
    out surroundings
    finding answers
    always in compitition
    trying to be the best
    wanting to come out on too
    pushing our our limits
    reaching for the stars
    to know three
    major questions
    are we alone in the universe?
    What is the meaning of life?
    What are our limits, if any?
    We are a demanding race
    always moving
    always searching
     
  14. Doing what is right
    Not for fame,
    Not for fortune,
    But for those in need,
    Oppressed,
    The hungry,
    The poor and homeless.
    Being there for others,
    Lending a hand,
    Or moral support.
    Doing what others will not.
    Being a guide,
    A friend,
    An unsung hero
     
  15. It's just a poem, it's not even very good, but here it is ~

    Day has ended,
    But night is gone,
    Time has stopped,
    Yet I walk on,
    Into the havens,
    Where I'll be free,
    To live in peace,
    Eternally.

    My time has come,
    I fear it not,
    Unto this earth I say,
    Farewall.
     
  16. Those poems are really good! Let me see if I can find a couple of mine...
     
  17. My Mistake

    I sit here crying, looking grim,
    Feeling hurt, soul stained with sin,
    Tears falling down, with hopeless sight,
    As I will things to be alright. 

    As I wonder, ponder life,
    Taken away with a blood-red knief,
    I know that I have gone astray,
    Hopeless, lost, cast away.

    Memories flash, go through my mind.
    Relief is not here. Death won't be so kind.
    Pain will proceed, a heart torn and ripped.
    And in my hands, my life has slipped. 
     
  18. Very good everyone