Some of my poems and thought

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.

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  1. Bump for viewers
     
    #41 colonial, Dec 9, 2009
  2. Whooooa that was good 0.0 I bow to your greatness. I'm not good at poetry, but I am very good at literary analysis. I saw the symbolism ;)
     
    #42 lililililililililil, Dec 9, 2009
  3. Bump last poem on pg4
     
    #43 colonial, Dec 9, 2009
  4. Thanks. But my pulse is of for them. I need to work on that
     
    #44 colonial, Dec 9, 2009
  5. I need to facebook that last one
     
    #45 colonial, Dec 9, 2009
  6. Poetry has no rules. You don't have to follow any set of rules. Just do what you feel is the most natural for you. I like your style although it may not be my favorite.
     
    #46 lililililililililil, Dec 9, 2009
  7. The 5 before I started doing requests u mean
     
    #47 colonial, Dec 9, 2009
  8. bump
     
    #48 colonial, Dec 9, 2009
  9. Good
     
    #49 xConTineNtaL-, Dec 9, 2009
  10. Thx
     
    #50 colonial, Dec 9, 2009
  11. Do a poem about Portal
     
    #51 *Ryol (01), Dec 9, 2009
  12. I like 6 and 7 the best
     
    #52 Saki_Hanajima, Dec 9, 2009
  13. Nice colonial they are nice poems
     
    #53 Storallelite, Dec 9, 2009
  14. Srry ryol I really don't know what kind of game portal is. I've seen it played but I never really had an intrest in it.
     
    #54 colonial, Dec 9, 2009
  15. Bump
     
    #55 colonial, Dec 9, 2009
  16. Bump
     
    #56 colonial, Dec 9, 2009
  17. Colonial, I'm really happy you did this, and I hope you get the same peace that I do out of it. I think I'll post one now.
     
    #57 *Irin (01), Dec 10, 2009
  18. Dude I've seen half these on the Internet
     
    #58 *M3T4LL1C4 (01), Dec 10, 2009
  19. Irin #1
    hope within

    my love of life, my hope within,
    my truths and sorrows must begin.
    The tears I shed, the words I write,
    giving me closure, giving me light.
    The life I love, as seconds go by,
    leaving forever, but keep it I try.
    Then there's the pain, that won't leave me be,
    when all that I have is a wish to be free.
    I take a deep breath, and times running out,
    no one can hear me, as I try to shout,
    the world is a blur, racing through my mind,
    my heart is pounding, trying to find,
    a reason to live, a hope within.
    I take a last breath, for, I cannot win.
     
    #59 *Irin (01), Dec 10, 2009
  20. I promise that you won't find mine on the Internet.
     
    #60 *Irin (01), Dec 10, 2009
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