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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by colonial, Dec 9, 2009.
Bump for viewers
Whooooa that was good 0.0 I bow to your greatness. I'm not good at poetry, but I am very good at literary analysis. I saw the symbolism
Bump last poem on pg4
Thanks. But my pulse is of for them. I need to work on that
I need to facebook that last one
Poetry has no rules. You don't have to follow any set of rules. Just do what you feel is the most natural for you. I like your style although it may not be my favorite.
The 5 before I started doing requests u mean
Do a poem about Portal
I like 6 and 7 the best
Nice colonial they are nice poems
Srry ryol I really don't know what kind of game portal is. I've seen it played but I never really had an intrest in it.
Colonial, I'm really happy you did this, and I hope you get the same peace that I do out of it. I think I'll post one now.
Dude I've seen half these on the Internet
my love of life, my hope within,
my truths and sorrows must begin.
The tears I shed, the words I write,
giving me closure, giving me light.
The life I love, as seconds go by,
leaving forever, but keep it I try.
Then there's the pain, that won't leave me be,
when all that I have is a wish to be free.
I take a deep breath, and times running out,
no one can hear me, as I try to shout,
the world is a blur, racing through my mind,
my heart is pounding, trying to find,
a reason to live, a hope within.
I take a last breath, for, I cannot win.
I promise that you won't find mine on the Internet.