Okay this is rediculous. I feel like I fell down a warped rabbit hole. I'm going to get off and watch Inuyasha because I'm a bamf.
Gandalf can bring all the Elves in the forest But he'll still get his silly ass wooped by Chuck Norris
This is amusing but I must go for my battery is at a low I'm proud my thread has been used I'm proud to see your views so now I bid adue good night farewell and achu
My feelings are hurt from your sticks n your stones But you'll need Chuck Norris to break these bones
Insane i must say conq is correct you need to work on ryhming but with a smile I shall say I like your sense of style of course I mean your sense of words but be a little more creative try using other words and phrases chuck Norris is fine but it gets old my gosh I can't stop ryhming
What the hell so much hate why do people iratitate putting others down just to hide how they really feel inside
I mostly stick with haikus. Short and easy. Good enough for my non-creative mind. Except they don't let you express much...
Here I am In this place alone Whispering secrets so lyrical Running from place to place Shining and being every race Discriminate Against my face I thought this world was a better place Words being twisted Others being missen So tell me now Why and how You thought this would Help me now So take the blade Cut my noose Cause either way There is no use..
LOL this one is different... She smiled in outrage With her demonic smile Turned and whispered Hate so wild I wondered what Was to come And she laughed and heard All those thoughts Then she yelled and screeched I was not scared She took my hand And all was bare I laughed and laughed For I was too The demonic child She loved.. Her boo
Shadows follow me I'm covered in dark Life starts fading How did things get so far? These scars outline my body Shadows hide them And leave me hidden From each sin I'm in It doesn't let me get any help Just overwhelms my entire thoughts Leaving me faded Towards the dark. I can't see anymore I'm in too far I'm blinded I am gone Leave don't enter That's all I deserve huh?
Here's my longest and best Looking down The battle ground Choosing paths of dark or light Don't know where Because brothers fair Look at me Threads of clothes Shining bright Yet too dark to know Divource my soul Divide my thoughts Nothing here But blood and guts From me I see? I know, how normal can I be? I laugh and cry Yet can slaughter magnificantly From eye to eye Far away a young one travels Seeking my heroic mind Is everyone blind? Can't they tell That even I'm a crime? Your face is shoved Shoved by me To the dirt Of which you croak I am not a hero I am not a crime I will steal And no I will not cease Not like you want I am who I am I am always who you'll love As you look down at the battle ground I look into you deep I slwallow hard My throat raw Wanting to halter But yet I'd falter If I had not gone So I ran down Protected the crown Of all that is royal On this sacred soil My fingers ran across my sword My hand and it embraced I rose it out And struck at them After shout and shout As they fell to their knees I pushed them down And the earth shook The ground cracked And I tumbled down After a hard push I thought I had won I killed all the bad But surely I was tricked By a smart young lad Who? Not only but you This is why I choose both ways Either way you'll be betrayed Evil or good.. Who cares? So I hit down Six feet deep As my face was covered in shame By my hood.
Killzone, I love the poem!! It fits perfectly into my story... Mind if I quote you? I'll give you credit of course. iZ
Seth these are poems they follow different rules. Stay off this thread if your just gonna criticize grammar