Soldier of Broken Glass FeedBack

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 12, 2012.

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  1. Great story phenomenal
     
    #21 *The-Wolf-Mark (01), Mar 12, 2012
  2. Not plagiarized.

    Same plot as many other stories?
    Yes.
    Same theme as many other stories?
    Yes.
    Predetermined hate for plagiarizing before?
    Yes.
    Rushed like all your other self written stories, as well as semi-well structured and mediocre overall?
    Yes.
     
    #22 cheesemuffin, Mar 12, 2012
  3. Well, now that I actually bothered to read it after posting that feedback, I have only one thing to say.

    TENSES.
    GAAAAAAAAAAÄH!
     
    #23 cheesemuffin, Mar 12, 2012
  4. Well atleast u said it's not plagiarized, but did u like it atleast?
     
    #24 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 12, 2012
  5. Could be better. But then again, I can too.
     
    #25 cheesemuffin, Mar 12, 2012
  6. I've never heard of a story like this one except the obvious that there r other stories about the Holocaust
     
    #26 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 12, 2012
  7. Number the Stars is the most well known of this type of story.

    There's a crapload of these.
     
    #27 cheesemuffin, Mar 12, 2012
  8. I read Number Of the stars, it's nothin like this
     
    #28 Xx-FrostyTheSatanist-xX, Mar 12, 2012
  9. Number of the Stars is about a girl who helped hide her best friend nothing at all like my story -.-
     
    #29 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 12, 2012
  10. Same concept, different POV.
     
    #30 cheesemuffin, Mar 12, 2012
  11. Not at all the same
     
    #31 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 12, 2012
  12. I like it! More! More!
     
    #32 LemondoughnutPXC, Mar 12, 2012
  13. :D I'll post more soon
     
    #33 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 12, 2012
  14. Oh and if u have any requests for what you'd like to happen just wall me and we'll see
     
    #34 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 12, 2012
  15. Next chapter is now posted!!!!
     
    #35 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 13, 2012
  16. OOO SNAP c:
     
    #36 Xx-FrostyTheSatanist-xX, Mar 13, 2012
  17. I say you should have put that 4th chapter more further in the story
     
    #37 *Mosspool (01), Mar 13, 2012
  18. Yeah I know but I was running out of ideas for the beginning
     
    #38 XxBrooke_ParisXx, Mar 13, 2012
  19. You need to check your grammer but other than that it's great!!!
     
    #39 Jonathan07, Mar 13, 2012
  20. -sobs- SO BEAUTIFUL!!! Where's the freaking tissue when you need it? >_>
     
    #40 LethalEncounter, Mar 14, 2012
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