skull cracker

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *hulkzord (01), Oct 21, 2012.

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  1. GOD BLESS YOUR FAMILY AND OFFSPRING FOR A THOUSAND GENERATION GOD BLESS YOUR MOTHER THY FATHER GOD BLESS YOU'RE SISTER THY BROTHER GRAND DAD THY GRAND MA
     
    #21 *hulkzord (01), Oct 21, 2012
  2. there I may be a crybaby at least I show you I have a heart
     
    #22 *hulkzord (01), Oct 21, 2012
  3. everyone has a heart.

    not everyone has the courage in their heart to except their shortcomings.

    not everyone has the strength in their heart to improve themselves.

    you want to prove something to me? prove that your heart is worth a damn.
     
    #23 wordwaster, Oct 21, 2012
  4. who cares All I said was god bless you
     
    #24 *hulkzord (01), Oct 21, 2012
  5. you said a lot more than that.

    please believe me, hulkzord. i am not trying to hurt you. i really am trying to help.
     
    #25 wordwaster, Oct 21, 2012
  6. so making funvof me helping is helping
     
    #26 *hulkzord (01), Oct 21, 2012
  7. I mean fun of
     
    #27 *hulkzord (01), Oct 21, 2012
  8. Guys, cool it! It's just a game here, so you guys shouldn't make it so personal! :eek:

    Hulkzord, you could try making the sentences be more complete, if you want. Also, extra details can make the plot more interesting. What did the roller coaster look like? What was the theme park like? Keep writing, and it will get better! :)
     
    #28 *Love_Mandy (01), Oct 21, 2012
  9. I was until he came and started going blah blah and waited but if it wasn't good details I would of understood yes I get about the sentences
     
    #29 *hulkzord (01), Oct 21, 2012
  10. "blah blah"?

    i don't know why i bother. :|
     
    #30 wordwaster, Oct 21, 2012
  11. You could of waited I was only on page 1 if it was horrible at page 2 I would understand why
     
    #31 *hulkzord (01), Oct 21, 2012
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