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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -ShadowAssassin-, Feb 28, 2011.

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  1. Hmmm might want to work on rhythm a bit. A big part of poetry is the flow.
     
    #21 *iPimella (01), Mar 10, 2011
  2. Hmm.. I actually liked the rhythm I had. Sure, I diverged from it a couple of times, but I like it that way
     
    #22 -ShadowAssassin-, Mar 10, 2011
  3. Come on guys:/
     
    #23 -ShadowAssassin-, Mar 11, 2011
  4. Hmm...pretty good...I  them almost as much as i  you...oh wait nevermind....thats SA 
     
    #24 Kaiiyo, Mar 11, 2011
  5. -.-
     
    #25 -ShadowAssassin-, Mar 11, 2011
  6. New poem, my deepest yet:)
     
    #26 -ShadowAssassin-, Mar 11, 2011
  7. Very nice I  it
     
    #27 Storallelite, Mar 12, 2011
  8. Thanks stor:)
     
    #28 -ShadowAssassin-, Mar 12, 2011
  9. Ur poems are awesome : srry for not saying on here before but I didnt recognize it
     
    #29 *Poisonfang (02), Mar 12, 2011
  10. Lol it's cool
     
    #30 -ShadowAssassin-, Mar 12, 2011
  11. Bump;)
     
    #31 -ShadowAssassin-, Mar 12, 2011
  12. The last poem is very good...idk about anyone else I thought it was very emotional.
     
    #32 Storallelite, Mar 12, 2011
  13. :)
     
    #33 -ShadowAssassin-, Mar 13, 2011
  14. Bump
     
    #34 -ShadowAssassin-, Mar 20, 2011
  15. Hmmm
     
    #35 -ShadowAssassin-, Apr 1, 2011
  16. Bump:)
     
    #36 -ShadowAssassin-, Jun 20, 2011
  17. Oh hey shadow, sign up for my new story please?
     
    #37 FeatherHunter, Jun 20, 2011
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