Semper Fi Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Rainkeeper, Jul 9, 2010.

  1. I need characters

    Name:
    Age:
    Weapon:
    Look:
    Personality;
     
  2. I NEED MORE CHAPTERS ON TRAITORS,IM HOOKED BEYOND EXPLANATION!!!
     
  3. Put me back in there diffrent name though
    name alex
    weapon bow and arrow
    age15
    apperance long black chopy hair
    bio small and swift with alot of brains
     
  4. Wow I got mixed up with ur other story sorry make me have pistols
     
  5. No idea what this story is bout but I like the "Fi" part in the title :) I'll make a character I guess aswell

    Name: Fi

    age: hold on I have a Q about that

    look:6'9 tall, wears long brown cloak with hood, brown eyes, brown hair hates it
    cut but not 2 often, right arm was blown
    off by gernade
    he has a bio-mechanical arm in it's place
    that is fully functunal and can electrically charge nething :)

    weapons: sniper, 2 short swords , metal
    rod that can b electrically charged from
    his 'arm' that is his favorite weapon

    and... I think I got it all except my Q bout
    age part ok here it is

    Is this story real-life kinda thing or can ppl b thousands o yrs old?
     
  6. Sorry, I wasn't one yesterday, big party and gf broke her leg :-( . Which means while I take care if her I'll have more time to write :p .

    And yes it is a real life thing.
     
  7. So no 1000 year olds