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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Utho (01), Jul 5, 2011.

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  1. It kept hitting the wrong letter. So I just went with autocorrects.
     
    #21 Eagleking, Jul 6, 2011
  2. Yay part two!
     
    #22 *Utho (01), Jul 10, 2011
  3. Pretty darn epic
     
    #23 Marodo, Jul 10, 2011
  4. That poor boy...

    No good deed goes unpunished in Selens world! Lawl
     
    #24 *Utho (01), Jul 10, 2011
  5. Great story so far
     
    #25 Storallelite, Jul 10, 2011
  6. Awesome utho! Just read it lol  I wonder what's next... Swimming? Surfing maybe? Lol keep it up awesome storytelling utho!! (I think I suck compared to you haahaa)
     
    #26 PrincessElf, Jul 10, 2011
  7. Love the story 
     
    #27 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 10, 2011
  8. Thanks all. And elfers just get DK to read. But then again like XL, bull, Chaz, psy are gone sooo that sucks. I miss crazy ol Psy
     
    #28 *Utho (01), Jul 11, 2011
  9. Will do utho! *salute* and I don't miss psy  he was a big fat meanie head
     
    #29 PrincessElf, Jul 11, 2011
  10. Why? He force fed ME skittles and shoved me in a closet
     
    #30 *Utho (01), Jul 11, 2011
  11. Cause all whatever he did :p
     
    #31 PrincessElf, Jul 11, 2011
  12. Bumpity bump.

    New chapter!
     
    #32 *Utho (01), Jul 18, 2011
  13. More please!
     
    #33 Storallelite, Jul 23, 2011
  14. I'll be writing for DT tomorrow. Sorry im going slow. Busy week
     
    #34 *Utho (01), Jul 23, 2011
  15. Awesome 
     
    #35 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Jul 23, 2011
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