School Drama Feedback and Discussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jun 19, 2011.

  1. U CAN DO IT FETH!

    ~starts doing cheerleading~ yes I know I'm a cheerleader at school.

    GO FETH GO FETH!
     
  2. ...Check SDS for the roles of everyone. First page.
     
  3. A ***** fight already? Nice 
     
  4. Please bring in a naked pillow fight at the hotties sleepover! 
     
  5. And get Chris to film it and show it the whole of their grade...  Comedy genius 
     
  6. You are such a MoJo.
     
  7. Born and raised

    MoJo
     
  8. the mojo thread was deleted....








    And MOTORBOATING IN CLASS??









    MY CHARACTER?
















    Ō_õ
     
  9. I'm gonna try draw my character for some reason.
     
  10. Ok. I gotta admit that the story is AWESOME! The only thing I'm seeing is some spelling errors. Great work though. Can't wait 4 more! :D
     
  11. Your eyes deceive you. As far as I know, there aren't any spelling errors.
     
  12. Um there's one I think.

    U said 'fenna' instead of 'gonna'.
     
  13. And that's pretty good mech