School Drama Feedback and Discussion

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by FeatherHunter, Jun 19, 2011.

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  1. What do you like the most?
     
    #201 FeatherHunter, Sep 25, 2011
  2. The intense part of when I'm in the hospital room nd like I have 3,300ppb of chloroform in my bloodstream and then the like glass cracks and the blood machine or whatever like explodes or yeah lol
     
    #202 *babygurl2112 (01), Sep 25, 2011
  3. Eh good
     
    #203 *IRONhulk (01), Sep 25, 2011
  4. Thanks ;)(;
     
    #204 FeatherHunter, Sep 25, 2011
  5. This is a very good story. I loved it. I can't wait until the rest of it comes out. Keep up the good work!
     
    #205 wet, Sep 25, 2011
  6. Thx :):)
     
    #206 FeatherHunter, Sep 25, 2011
  7. lol..... it's..... weird
     
    #207 Renatum, Sep 25, 2011
  8. You are weirder lol jk.
     
    #208 FeatherHunter, Sep 25, 2011
  9. Hello pointless argument number...... Eh lost track
     
    #209 *IRONhulk (01), Sep 25, 2011
  10. Get off my thread.
     
    #210 FeatherHunter, Sep 25, 2011
  11. Did not see that jk 0-0
     
    #211 *IRONhulk (01), Sep 25, 2011
  12. Just read all of it. Awesomeness 
     
    #212 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Sep 26, 2011
  13. Interesting…I have a suggestion.
    Involve Eva more :D jokes jokes, I love your book, please write more!

    Swag x
     
    #213 *I_Got_Da_Swagger (01), Sep 26, 2011
  14. Thanks for the posotive feedback.
     
    #214 FeatherHunter, Sep 26, 2011
  15. It was ok. Though I'm starting to get confused on what the characters are trying to do and what's happening.
     
    #215 Storallelite, Sep 26, 2011
  16. There was an overlap or time fusion between the two PoV's. Michelle woke up after the stuff got banged up, but Brandon and Callia saw it. A pathogen is a harmful bacteria. Deoxyribonucleic acid is DNA. RNA is ribonucleic acid.

    Callia and Brandon were trying to kill the killer.

    When they released the bomb, Jade sees the pathogen through her window. The pathogen crack the windows.
     
    #216 FeatherHunter, Sep 27, 2011
  17. Oh ok but I recommend not doing that kind of thing too much or it'll be confusing
     
    #217 Storallelite, Sep 28, 2011
  18. Bump for link to story.
     
    #218 FeatherHunter, Oct 17, 2011
  19. This is sooo good!! More please!!
     
    #219 *Psychonaut (03), Dec 27, 2011
  20. Is more coming?
     
    #220 *the__wrath (01), Dec 28, 2011
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