Sapphires Battle

Lol Kimber. I told you that once. And I told Arimay that, ad Cinderpelt and Amberfur, and german_idiot and lady_m

BTW. Saphire. Write the chapter up in notes first. Then post it. Also use punctuation, it helps the readability and makes it less messy.

 

I am GlooMi. Hear me roar. Ask any writer here, I am the unofficial story helper/criticiser lolz

 

When'd u tell me that gloom lol

 

During your first story. In feedback. Lol

 

Hmm don't remember but that's ok lol

 

Try to make posts a little longer so ppl will keep intrest.

 

I think we scared her away...

 

Awwwwwe...........semicolon frowny face