Salvation is Fleeting Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by KlaSSiK, Nov 22, 2010.

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  1. 2nd best is good, lol
     
    #61 KlaSSiK, Dec 9, 2010
  2. Great story so far. Keep doing what you're doing. My only suggestion is to proofread. There are a few annoying grammatical errors.

    As for the person that mentioned it being cliche, I have to disagree. It feels different. And he's so elaborate with his story, I don't care if he's writing about zombies or the impact of the great depression on society in the 30's.
     
    #62 *Gen_Spartan (01), Dec 9, 2010
  3. Ive posted a pretty long update n im posting a rare 2nd update later today! Happy reading!
     
    #63 KlaSSiK, Dec 9, 2010
  4. I hope to find an editor to help check the story soon! If interested let me know!
     
    #64 KlaSSiK, Dec 9, 2010
  5. Sry no 2nd update tonight!
     
    #65 KlaSSiK, Dec 10, 2010
  6. #66 Renatum, Dec 10, 2010
  7. Thnks, appreciate that, ill put it on the 1st page of this thread
     
    #67 KlaSSiK, Dec 10, 2010
  8. yw

    ill always help a writer

    p.s. i love ur story
     
    #68 Renatum, Dec 10, 2010
  9. fail?
     
    #69 Renatum, Dec 10, 2010
  10. Lol, thnks and woops :/

    Ill fix that now XD
     
    #70 KlaSSiK, Dec 10, 2010
  11. Updated again!
     
    #71 KlaSSiK, Dec 13, 2010
  12. Sry properly updated now
     
    #72 KlaSSiK, Dec 13, 2010
  13. Bumping to lower amber's story.
     
    #73 Starwars6374, Dec 14, 2010
  14. sweet?
     
    #74 KlaSSiK, Dec 15, 2010
  15. Basically, that meant this is important than spam, and I am allowed to post there.
     
    #75 Starwars6374, Dec 15, 2010
  16. Updated
     
    #76 KlaSSiK, Dec 15, 2010
  17. Cool 
     
    #77 Starwars6374, Dec 15, 2010
  18. Here conner
     
    #78 KlaSSiK, Dec 15, 2010
  19. Btw share with ur clan :)
     
    #79 KlaSSiK, Dec 15, 2010
  20. No prob story Is awesome please keep updating
     
    #80 Dark-Majesty, Dec 15, 2010
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