Salvation is Fleeting Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by KlaSSiK, Nov 22, 2010.

  1. Tnks earth, if u only give me a name n brief description itll be added lol
     
  2. Ok he can be called Gregory Earth, he's in his early 20's and played college football. (Kind of tough, but still an average guy. He's Mad because of the loss of his friends, and wants to kill zombies.) if he is alive during the apocalypse.
     
  3.  god job. For your first story, you're doing quite well
     
  4. Thnks gloomi, i nvr thought i could do a GOD job 
     
  5. Update posted 
     
  6. I really like the intro
     
  7. Thnks sholron 
     
  8. George Thomson, 37, father of two(Timothy, 19 and Leah, 18), divorced war veteran, severed in Iraq three and in Afghanistan four times. Seven months ago while doing a daily patrol in Kuweit he lost his left leg just above the knee when he stepped off the route on the landmine. He is waiting is leg prosthetic operation to get rid of his crutches. He never got himself a wheelchair because he is too proud to use one as in it he would need assistance. He is 3rd generation in the army, both his father and grandfather died while serving the country and he found coming back wounded as a disgrace as now he was useless to his country and a burden to his kids.
     
  9. Lol my descriptions are always bit long even when i plan to stay as short as possible :$
     
  10. Hmm lol, interesting pink, ill work him in, btw, update chapter 2 later today!
     
  11. I can't wait to see how the story unravels. It should be good.
     
  12. Thnks floating
     
  13. OMG! some girl just quoted you on Facebook! She even said "from a very good friend of mine's story, Salvation"

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  14. Me gloomi? Lol
     
  15. Yeah! It was the beginning paragraph 
     
  16.  cant wait for the rest!
     
  17. Whos it gloomi?! 

    And thnks guys, ur comments go a long way
     
  18. Posted an edited, combined version of the story so far, ill also be adding an update later today! :geek: