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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Feb 9, 2011.

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  1. D) other
     
    #101 Mournful_Assassin, Feb 17, 2011
  2. D)
     
    #102 Storallelite, Feb 17, 2011
  3. Chapter 3?

    Love this btw! First time reading Fan Fiction section. Great job! 
     
    #103 killjoy777, Feb 17, 2011
  4. Going on vacation! Good job cheese! Be back latar.
     
    #104 Smighter89, Feb 17, 2011
  5. NEW CHAPTAR!
     
    #105 cheesemuffin, Feb 18, 2011
  6. Tone the cussing  Just a lil?
     
    #106 Mournful_Assassin, Feb 18, 2011
  7. Aww... But I like de cussing
     
    #107 cheesemuffin, Feb 18, 2011
  8. you can cuss  times a chapter not: "Damn... DAmn.... DAMNIT! GET OUT OF MY HEAD!"


    I can physcic through wifi
     
    #108 Mournful_Assassin, Feb 18, 2011
  9. But that creates the effect! When you're so pisswd you wanna kill someone, you don't just say "I'm goin to horribly mutilate your corpse!" you yell "I'm going to ****ing kill you, you piece of ***!"

    Is my logic not true?
     
    #109 cheesemuffin, Feb 18, 2011
  10. lol so true, real talk bruh real talk
     
    #110 FeatherHunter, Feb 18, 2011
  11. NEW PART AT LAST!

    By the way, provided at the end is actually supposed to be "proceeded"
     
    #111 cheesemuffin, Mar 1, 2011
  12. Lol
     
    #112 *iPimella (01), Mar 1, 2011
  13. Wow...nice. So im assuming that guy is bullet proof...?
     
    #113 *Irin (01), Mar 1, 2011
  14. Nope. He's an Archangel.

    SLOWMOTION POWARS!

    Guess who else is an archangel? Nope, I already told u :p
     
    #114 cheesemuffin, Mar 1, 2011
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    #115 Starwars6374, Mar 1, 2011
  16. *cough* You haz forgotten a certain cat *cough*
     
    #116 *Spottedleaf2 (01), Mar 1, 2011
  17. .... We ain't in revolution anymore. For all you know, those four characters are the only survivors. 
     
    #117 cheesemuffin, Mar 1, 2011
  18. What about our deal cheese?
     
    #118 FeatherHunter, Mar 1, 2011
  19. ... I said SO MANY TIMES that the characters won't be introduced immediately, and I also warned that I might not keep a promise
     
    #119 cheesemuffin, Mar 1, 2011
  20. Hmmm
     
    #120 FeatherHunter, Mar 1, 2011
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