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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Feb 9, 2011.

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  1. It's great cheese! You're writing is definately improving!
     
    #61 *Irin (01), Feb 12, 2011
  2. : D
     
    #62 cheesemuffin, Feb 12, 2011
  3. Great job! Confuseing...but still, great job.
     
    #63 *Irin (01), Feb 12, 2011
  4. The confusion is the interesting part.
     
    #64 Starwars6374, Feb 12, 2011
  5. How is it confusing?

    Cerberus made Irin, Cheese and Benny go insane so far...

    Are you INSULTING A PHYCOLOGISTS INABILITY TO GO INSANE! This is BLASPHEMY
     
    #65 cheesemuffin, Feb 12, 2011
  6. And Star is correct.

    I like to make things confusing... Or do I?
     
    #66 cheesemuffin, Feb 12, 2011
  7. For some reason that chapter made me laugh. I'm getting to tired, everything makes me laugh. I'm laughing just writing this!
     
    #67 *lady-marian (01), Feb 12, 2011
  8. You need some rest, Lady...

    From what I gather, you're suffering from fatigue
     
    #68 cheesemuffin, Feb 12, 2011
  9. So I get slap-happy when I'm tired...
     
    #69 *lady-marian (01), Feb 12, 2011
  10. Lmao lady and cheese :) great post btw
     
    #70 FeatherHunter, Feb 12, 2011
  11. Nice post cheese, got a bit confused on the first read but I think I understand now after a few more reads.
     
    #71 Storallelite, Feb 12, 2011
  12. *bows to cheese* I wonder who this is..
     
    #72 *Bluestorm89 (01), Feb 12, 2011
  13. Um... I honestly don't know...

    Marvin?
     
    #73 cheesemuffin, Feb 13, 2011
  14. No.. It can't be./.

    SMIGHTERS ALT!? 
     
    #74 cheesemuffin, Feb 13, 2011
  15. Numbers? OH NO YOU DIDN'T!




    Black ops ripoff 




    JK
     
    #75 TheSilverPanda, Feb 13, 2011
  16. MARVIN'S GARDENS!!!
     
    #76 TheSilverPanda, Feb 13, 2011
  17. Lol, yep. That's for my mom's iPhone when I lose my iTouch. XD
     
    #77 Smighter89, Feb 13, 2011
  18. Lulz
     
    #78 cheesemuffin, Feb 13, 2011
  19. The J3lack shadows have been serving cerebus..


    Please put me in:D
     
    #79 Mournful_Assassin, Feb 13, 2011
  20.  I noticed I didnt congratulate u on dis one. Lol. *bowth toth cheeseth*
     
    #80 Smighter89, Feb 14, 2011
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