Rise of the Minor Gods Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Kimber03 (01), Aug 12, 2010.

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  1. AWESOME! can't wait for part 4
     
    #81 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  2. Ohh well at least he in rye story
     
    #82 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  3. Thanks guys and thanks bjorn for understanding.
     
    #83 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  4. Ur welcome now post part 4
     
    #84 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  5. Guess I don't have a choice or else there will be an angry mob. Lol. Part 4 here I go.
     
    #85 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  6. **UPDATE**
    PART 4 is up!
    (Note: Sorry there are no italics. I couldn't log in for forums on my pc.)
     
    #86 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  7. I read all of it so far and I must say that it is great!
     
    #87 *Utho (01), Aug 15, 2010
  8. Great job!
     
    #88 Porygod, Aug 15, 2010
  9. Thanks! Oh and by the way, were you able to tell when hector was thinking or not?
     
    #89 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  10. Great job!
     
    #90 Porygod, Aug 15, 2010
  11. Another awesome part! 
     
    #91 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  12. Thanks peoples! I'll probably be posting chapter 2 part 1 tomorrow. I have to say it's a cliffhanger.
     
    #92 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  13. Anyone want me to post chapter 2 today?
     
    #93 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  14. I do!!!! Nm I don't want to rush you, post at ur own pace!
     
    #94 Porygod, Aug 15, 2010
  15. I'm actually working on chapter 4 now so I don't really mind. Anyone else?
     
    #95 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  16. I want u to!!!!!
     
    #96 YoDude, Aug 15, 2010
  17. **UPDATE**
    Chapter 2 Part 1 is now posted.
     
    #97 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  18. Name: Pory
    Age: 14
    Apperance: Raven-colored hair and green eyes
    Bio: Pory's had a slightly bad life. His mom died when he was ten, and Pory
    had to survive on his own. He bribed and tricked others into giving him things to stay alive.
    Parent: Hermes
    Weapon: Checkered Scimator

     Sorry if it's bad: make him evil if you want!
     
    #98 Porygod, Aug 15, 2010
  19. Utho
    Same age as the other kids
    Son of Apollo
    Fun loving but can be serious when he needs to. Shoots his bow well.
    Kinda long light brown hair and short for his age.

    You don't have to use him but I just wanna give you this choice of character
     
    #99 *Utho (01), Aug 15, 2010
  20. I'll consider using pory and I think we have enough Apollo children, sorry utho
     
    #100 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 15, 2010
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