Grammar? Check. Plot?! Check! Good story?!?! Check!!! Woah!! I love it!! Look at all these exclamation points!!!!!!! I am hooked, don't you go stopping this story! D: Love it love it love it! P.S. You're rubbish, hater-dude.
Also, if you're still taking character ideas... (And I've been trying to get this dude's appearance in a story for a while. XD) Name: Deileon (Subject to your approval) Age: 15 Appearance: Lanky and clumsy-looking. He has straight and un-styled red-blonde hair. Wears tight-ish clothing, usually darker colors, but also has a fondness for white. Bio: Deileon grew up on Delos, birthplace of Apollo. Uh, that's about all I have. XD If you wanna use 'im, you can change whatever you want! ^_^ Mother: Leto Weapon: Sword and shield, nothin' too fancy.
I didn't wanna go here, but you forced me to, Ryandon. Firstly, I can't get past the first page of Footprint in the Sand, or whatever. It does not have anything close to the grammatical correctness of this story, and they sing along to "I Gotta Feelin'". Ew. As far as plot goes, hey, that's your choice. I'm not gonna diss your favorite story cause I think the plot is stupid. Third, Percy Jackson is based on Greek mythology, correct? So, it's as much a spin-off as this story is. This story might have been inspired by Percy Jackson, but the ghost boyfriend thing has been done before as well. If you don't like it, please say your piece and leave. (That was cool, right? *So cool!*)
Percy Jackson includes Greek mythology like harry potter includes magic but this basicly is Percy Jackson and a rubbish version at that but there's grammar mistakes in a footprint in the sand because the writer wrote it on a iPod
Ryandon, your ruining this story for those who like it, oh and btw, I wrote my story on an iPod too, but there are fewer mistakes! I'm not saying that I don't like footprint in the sand, it's actually an ok story, but I like this story as well, and your ruining it for me.
There have been TONS of Greek mythology spin offs. Just because this happens to include demigods doesn't mean it's a Percy jackson spinoff. It has a different plot, different details, and it's well writen. As for the "Footprints in the Sand" that storyline is a mixture of girly ghost cliche and twilight. The grammar and spelling mistakes are atrocious, the organization is a major problem, overkills on the dry and boring description but hardly describes the verbs at all! The writer is ignorant of any mistakes she makes and refuses to accept any criticism though her story is far from perfect. On the other hand rise of the minor gods is well written and thought out, organized, and has interesting plot twists. She uses description very well, and rarely over or underkills on it so the reader can "see" what is happening. The only criticism I can give her is that her endings are often a little abrupt for my taste, but that is a minor issue. In other words Kimber: Arimay:
Oh also, kimber rakes criticism well. She rarely repeats her mistakes and is generally an awesome writer.