Rise of the Minor Gods Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Kimber03 (01), Aug 12, 2010.

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  1. To short but still good
     
    #221 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  2. Yeah I know. I'm trying to make the chapters easier to read. Take Chapter 1 for example. If I posted that all at once, I doubt I would have as many readers.
     
    #222 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  3. Do u have room for another character?
     
    #223 wtfwtf, Aug 28, 2010
  4. Possibly. It depends if I like the character.
     
    #224 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  5. Name:Jake
    Age:19
    Father:Hades
    Weapon:2 long swords
    Bio:Lived with his mom since 11 when he ran away he was found by a group of kids around his age and followed them until he was 16, he was separated from the group and wandered around ever since
     
    #225 wtfwtf, Aug 28, 2010
  6. U like it?
     
    #226 wtfwtf, Aug 28, 2010
  7. I have a child of Hades, but possibly. I'm not too sure about the name though.
     
    #227 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  8. oh and do u mind doing appearance
     
    #228 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  9. Wait Jake could be child of Ares?

    Just a sugestion
     
    #229 *Bjorn21 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  10. Ok

    Name:Ilkar (first letter is i)
    Appearance:wears a black t-shirt and a black torn up jeans
     
    #230 wtfwtf, Aug 28, 2010
  11. I'll go with Ares idea. Thanks
     
    #231 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  12. Thanks 
     
    #232 wtfwtf, Aug 28, 2010
  13. Hi guys I need your opinion. If you've been reading my story, you might have thought that a few sparks fly between Hector and Selene. This is a MAJOR SPOILER so don't read if you want to be surprised.
















































    Well anyway, I've been planning to make Hector and Selene a couple. But as I was typing, something dawned on me. Artemis is the daughter of Zeus. And if Selene is the daughter of Artemis, and Hector is the son of Zeus, would they be related in blood? Help me out here guys, please.
     
    #233 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  14. Bump.
     
    #234 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  15. Well it would seem that Selene was with her uncle, Hector, lol, but I think it's fine for those two, it's okay.

    iZ
     
    #235 Nlaz, Aug 28, 2010
  16. I guess. The family relationships for the gods confuses me.
     
    #236 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  17. Well some gods did this, others that, so go ahead and mix and match. The gods did it and eventually out popped a demigod, lol.

    iZaln
     
    #237 Nlaz, Aug 28, 2010
  18. **UPDATE**
    Chapter 5 Part 2 is now posted! Please read and enjoy!
     
    #238 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  19. this is hurtful, no replies in the past hour
     
    #239 *Kimber03 (01), Aug 28, 2010
  20. OMG! Will Selene die??
     
    #240 Porygod, Aug 29, 2010
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