Lol I think it's all good because gargoth scared the **** put of me and then the good guys are like crap! Then a dude is like come with me I'f you want to live I see it as a comedy
Ironhulk you can view it any way you want. Btw I can do 1 on 1 dialogue just not multi person dialogue
Hmm...well, it's mostly just thinking what the character itself would say in the situation. That's how I try to write dialogue. Multiple dialogue is hard, all I can say is keep in mind what characters are in that present scene.