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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010.

  1. GO ChEESE!!!!! P.S. You don't have to put everyone in.
     
  2. Y AM I IGNORED?!?
     
  3. Like Fanged said, I don't have to put veryone in. Eventually, Ill reach the limit where I can't handle all the characters, so I might leave some people out.
     
  4. Good and can I join
     
  5. Personality

    That's all I need
     
  6. sometimes I'm a troll if the guy is a complete retahd
     
  7. Ok. Expect the chapter late at night (as usual)
     
  8. ok

    trolling now

    RAAAAAAWWWR
     
  9. I had to rewrite the whole thing because of that stupid Login thing. It's not as good as it should be....


    Btw, atophiswarchtower is atop his watchtower.
     
  10. im still not in it
    TROLL GAME SMASH
    NOW GAME TEAR AWAY ALL PEACE IN KAW USING GAME POWARS
    GAME MAD
     
  11. Oh ****. Damnit, GAME, you were in the earlier version. When I rewrote it, I forgot that part.... DAMNIT
     
  12. ok
    sorry about destroying all peace in kaw...


    i have anger issues
     
  13. game laugh at puny hoomen poking him with stick
    he know yu dont hav his only weeknesh...



    puppy
     
  14.  Awww man I'm still not in it yet 
     
  15. me isn't wanting to iz be troolin todae
     
  16. Hey cheese, which chapter am I in? I don't mean to sound like I'm complaining, I was just wondering.
     
  17. Probably the next one, but I have to find a way to smoothly incorporate the character into the story.


    AKA: I have to come up with a good entrance for the character, otherwise it'll seem like he just randomly appeared.
     
  18. Ok then you can put me In when you want. And I don't want to be a troll because do I EVER TROLL?
     
  19. Idk lol. Anyways... I'm not writing a part for a few days because Im updating and fixing my phone software-wise, so that I am prepared to give it to my sister when I get mag new iPhone 4. 
     
  20. I got my iPhone 4 AT LaST!!! But I couldn't get Cheesemuffin on this new phone.... So.... Hai all.