Revolution Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010.

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  1. Sweet! Keep it up! 
     
    #61 *Gen_Spartan (01), Dec 22, 2010
  2. Gen Spartan.... You're in the story now.
     
    #62 cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010
  3. I mean I'll put you in the next chapter or so.
     
    #63 cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010
  4. You probably need more female characters... Count me in 
     
    #64 *iPimella (01), Dec 22, 2010
  5.  I was hoping you'd apply!
     
    #65 cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010
  6. Now I'm scared  what am i going to be doing
     
    #66 *iPimella (01), Dec 22, 2010
  7. Idk. I figure with a name like GLOOMI, you'd be GLOOMI and dark and awesome and kick-ass and everything.
     
    #67 cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010
  8. And probably die in the end 
     
    #68 *iPimella (01), Dec 22, 2010
  9. Ok, that was weird. I don't just kill off characters. They usually return.

    I.e. Angel from Fading Fast
    Benny from Revolution
     
    #69 cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010
  10. Was that my only part??
     
    #70 Lord_Zethor, Dec 22, 2010
  11. Where am I? :(
     
    #71 CrayzJayz, Dec 22, 2010
  12. No, most certainly not. Same with Irin.
     
    #72 cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010
  13. I'll put everyone in eventually
     
    #73 cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010
  14. Sweet I has secret weapon wall and blunderbuss
     
    #74 german_idiot, Dec 22, 2010
  15. No was @ zethor

    I'll put evryone in was @ Jay
     
    #75 cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010
  16. If my friend applies, he'll getsomething uber magical special
     
    #76 cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010
  17. Was I at the bar?
     
    #77 CrayzJayz, Dec 22, 2010
  18. Maybe you were.... Maybe you were THE BARTENDER 
     
    #78 cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010
  19. Even more uber than blunderbuss
     
    #79 german_idiot, Dec 22, 2010
  20. Not a bad story. Interesting characters.
     
    #80 *ROAPopTarts (01), Dec 22, 2010
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