Revolution Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010.

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  1. Yeah, it's getting a little messy cheese…
     
    #341 CrayzJayz, Jan 27, 2011
  2. I'm going to try to fix it.....

    If it doesn't work, then I officially can't write well 
     
    #342 cheesemuffin, Jan 27, 2011
  3. Look at my fail no way to save that
     
    #343 IllIll_Jay_IllIll, Jan 27, 2011
  4. Bump?
     
    #344 Smighter89, Jan 28, 2011
  5. I'm not writing today, I have a biology midterm tomorrow
     
    #345 cheesemuffin, Jan 28, 2011
  6. K. I'm gonna look for things to bump.
     
    #346 Smighter89, Jan 28, 2011
  7. Where's my good part Cheese?
     
    #347 Lord_Zethor, Jan 31, 2011
  8. Idk, I'm confused on how I can fix the story, and until I figure out how to fix it, expect no writing -.-
     
    #348 cheesemuffin, Jan 31, 2011
  9. I think it's even good at the moment.
     
    #349 Smighter89, Feb 2, 2011
  10. Yeah, but a few people think it's really confusing and I'm not really able to write in any other way :(
     
    #350 cheesemuffin, Feb 2, 2011
  11. Then write the same! It's your choice. Plus, it's not their story. Just their opinion being put in. It is kinda confusing, but with you not posting any more, trying to figure out how to fix it (Which it doesn't really need to be), people are getting more confused cause you haven't posted in a long time. Plus, I know it'll unravel soon.
     
    #351 Smighter89, Feb 2, 2011
  12.  I just noticed I wrote another speech, sorry.
     
    #352 Smighter89, Feb 2, 2011
  13. You know what? You're right. But I'm too lazy to write anything til tomorrow 
     
    #353 cheesemuffin, Feb 2, 2011
  14. XD, sorry. I got grounded.
     
    #354 Smighter89, Feb 3, 2011
  15. Barmp.  Me just wanna see if anyone is still paying attention to this other than me.
     
    #355 Smighter89, Feb 8, 2011
  16. I am.
     
    #356 Starwars6374, Feb 8, 2011
  17. If gloomi hadn't posted her stupid (no offense meant) rating which cheese didn't ask for revolution would still be up and going.
     
    #357 FeatherHunter, Feb 8, 2011
  18. I know, I speeched him back tho. 
     
    #358 Smighter89, Feb 8, 2011
  19. Sorta. Yeah.
     
    #359 Smighter89, Feb 8, 2011
  20. Actually, I'm still writing. Just that I'm thinking too far ahead... So the next chapter's just gonna be one big super-chapter that ends it and goes straight to the sequel.....

    As for the delay, been busy with family and school :/
     
    #360 cheesemuffin, Feb 8, 2011
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