Revolution Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Dec 22, 2010.

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  1. Nope don't have to we made an agreement already lol crazy I love u little shootin-a-bird banana!!!
    ROFL
     
    #261 FeatherHunter, Jan 20, 2011
  2. Wut? A shootin'-a-bird-banana?
     
    #262 CrayzJayz, Jan 20, 2011
  3. *ahem*

    This is a feedback thread, not a conversation thread.

    Speaking of which, I'm writing a new chapter.

    PSS, anyone confused about the events in the new chapter? Noones even mentioned it... :(
     
    #263 cheesemuffin, Jan 20, 2011
  4. The Irin part leaves you in suspense.

    The Nightmare part I think I understand. You said before that half of them were dead right?
     
    #264 Starwars6374, Jan 20, 2011
  5. Half of them dead....? No...

    New part is up
     
    #265 cheesemuffin, Jan 20, 2011
  6. Love it! U might have a chance at getting this published. If u want, u can post it to my blog: Matttoppicks.blogspot.com
     
    #266 Batsy, Jan 20, 2011
  7. Errr maybe not published but definitely one of the better writers here (since all the others r kinda inactive)
     
    #267 german_idiot, Jan 20, 2011
  8. I'm one of the "better" ones? WOOT!

    I feels special!
     
    #268 cheesemuffin, Jan 21, 2011
  9. Wow...very confused. Very good Cheese!
     
    #269 *Irin (01), Jan 21, 2011
  10. 
     
    #270 cheesemuffin, Jan 21, 2011
  11. Just wanted to post here for no reason about to read newsh chapter.
     
    #271 Smighter89, Jan 21, 2011
  12. I can't wait for the next chapter. I almost cried when I finished the last one. Keep it up and great job.
     
    #272 Light_Mist, Jan 21, 2011
  13. I dont get why i was a troll of TN3U
     
    #273 MasterSlayerALi, Jan 21, 2011
  14. @Light mist - surely my writing isn't good enough to make someone cry... Are you sure you read the right one?
    Lol.

    @MSA - you just are. There aren't enough trolls in the story.

    @everyone else

    I'm posting a new chapter sometime before tomorrow
     
    #274 cheesemuffin, Jan 21, 2011
  15. Looking forward to that. I want to know who the other guardians are soon.
     
    #275 Starwars6374, Jan 22, 2011
  16. In time, star. In time..... 
     
    #276 cheesemuffin, Jan 22, 2011
  17. NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!
     
    #277 cheesemuffin, Jan 22, 2011
  18. Getting lost in the growing confusion. (Not bad, just suspenseful) It's getting interesting.
     
    #278 Starwars6374, Jan 22, 2011
  19. That's exactly the effect I was going for
     
    #279 cheesemuffin, Jan 22, 2011
  20. :)
     
    #280 cheesemuffin, Jan 22, 2011
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