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[cheesemuffin]

Hey guys! If you want to criticize or compliment Revolution, here's the place!

 

[cheesemuffin]

The first post on the story was just an intro. Another post is coming in just a sec.

 

[Interrobang]

Second.

A classic short chapter.

 

[cheesemuffin]

Well, it's short XD

It looked long when I was writing it...

Anyways, enjoy!

 

[cheesemuffin]

No feedback?

:S

 

[cheesemuffin]

Anyone? D:

 

[Smighter89]

Not me. :S I like it so far. :3

 

[Allioss]

Feather slamming his fist is what I imagine him doing everytime someone makes a rp >.> I love the intro can't wait for more

 

[*OkamiAmaterasu (01)]

I loooove it  Can't wait till all the other characters come in 

 

[Storallelite]

Great beginning, everyone seems to be portrayed well.

 

[cheesemuffin]

Finally wrote it. Enjoy!

 

[Smighter89]

WEWT!

 

[Smighter89]

I'm in the 3rd post! Last time I was in the like 6th!

 

[Nlaz]

༄Ahhhh it's awesome. More! I wanna read more of Revo! Cmon!༄

iZaln

 

[Winters]

Genius! XD

 

[cheesemuffin]

I was bored, and couldn't sleep... So I did what I NEVER DO:

Wrote two chapters in one day

 

[Smighter89]

NO WAI!!!! Good one. 

 

[Original_SwordMaster]

Cool story bro! Really I mean it!

 

[*OkamiAmaterasu (01)]

It's very good 
Can't wait for the next chapter 

 

[TheSilverPanda]

NO WAY

OHMAIGAWSH