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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Aug 11, 2011.

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  1. Abrupt like ****.
     
    #381 Bonfifi, Sep 20, 2011
  2. U can rely on it as much as theres a full moon every night
     
    #382 Empress_of_Shadows, Sep 20, 2011
  3. Who's the new guy in story and when is new chapter coming out?
     
    #383 mrTacos2503, Sep 20, 2011
  4. New chapter in under two hours.

    Cheese's honor
     
    #384 cheesemuffin, Sep 20, 2011
  5. Yaay!
     
    #385 *Irin (01), Sep 20, 2011
  6. Yay finally!!!!!
     
    #386 mrTacos2503, Sep 20, 2011
  7. iYaY!
     
    #387 Bonfifi, Sep 20, 2011
  8. Yay!
    (A bit late srry lol)
     
    #388 Storallelite, Sep 20, 2011
  9. Tick... Tock..
     
    #389 Smighter89, Sep 20, 2011
  10. I know cheese in real life

    He will make one today, hes told me so

    Wombats
     
    #390 matzah, Sep 20, 2011
  11. Wombat... Hehe
     
    #391 cheesemuffin, Sep 20, 2011
  12. It might be a little bit later, cuz I'm kinda busy.
     
    #392 cheesemuffin, Sep 20, 2011
  13. U got no work

    U just a lazy bum
     
    #393 matzah, Sep 20, 2011
  14. Besides homework, I have some stuff to do. I don't have Matzah to do everything
     
    #394 cheesemuffin, Sep 20, 2011
  15. Yep, I make my cat do all my work for me.

    Cause im a lazy bum
     
    #395 matzah, Sep 20, 2011
  16. Lol
     
    #396 Empress_of_Shadows, Sep 21, 2011
  17. Cheese will start writing at 8....

    Hes a liar...

    Cause...

    He is tired
     
    #397 matzah, Sep 21, 2011
  18. NEW CHAPTER IN TEN MINUTES!

    *just getting peer review from John*
     
    #398 cheesemuffin, Sep 21, 2011
  19. WOMBAT
     
    #399 cheesemuffin, Sep 21, 2011
  20. First feedback cause i read it early.

    Great idea using the wombats (WAS MY IDEA)

    Like the action, great cliffhanger
     
    #400 matzah, Sep 21, 2011
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