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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by cheesemuffin, Aug 11, 2011.

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  1. Really great chapter, as per usual.
    The stone slab you put in at the end intrigues me... What significance could it have?
    As I've said your writing style is very good. The story moves on with fluidity and I haven't discovered any spelling/grammar mistakes yet (that I can remember). Good job 
     
    #181 *OkamiAmaterasu (01), Aug 26, 2011
  2. Turns out extreme sleep deprivation makes me write well...

    Who'da thought?

    Check out the new chapter, OR ELSE.
     
    #182 cheesemuffin, Aug 26, 2011
  3. I already did. >:3 I loved it. Mostly the part where all the peaceful people died. And the trolls. Description=Forever 
     
    #183 Smighter89, Aug 26, 2011
  4. Just saying there should be a fanfic last stand
     
    #184 *IRONhulk (01), Aug 26, 2011
  5. All in good time. Just wait.
     
    #185 cheesemuffin, Aug 26, 2011
  6. Cheese did you really just try to hit meh
     
    #186 *IRONhulk (01), Aug 26, 2011
  7. Note to self: do not attack IRONhulk when I only have 300 units...
     
    #187 cheesemuffin, Aug 26, 2011
  8. Lol.
     
    #188 Smighter89, Aug 26, 2011
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    #189 *IRONhulk (01), Aug 26, 2011
  10. Lol I'm in it I get to say news didn't realize I was there until I scanned it over again I feel happy.
     
    #190 *IRONhulk (01), Aug 26, 2011
  11. I'm sure I've seen someone say Viva la revolution before. But who....
     
    #191 Eagleking, Aug 26, 2011
  12. I <3 the way this story is going. The depiction of Shifter is pure genius xD
     
    #192 Winters, Aug 26, 2011
  13. Lol I'm considered a troll 




    Good wriyin cheese smighter's discrption is awesome
     
    #193 *IRONhulk (01), Aug 26, 2011
  14. More!! Make it longer :p
     
    #194 Storallelite, Aug 26, 2011
  15.  Epic sauce!!!
     
    #195 Eagleking, Aug 26, 2011
  16. You must add me!

    :cry:


    I can't believe I didn't sign up sooner.
     
    #196 RenamedPhoenix, Aug 26, 2011
  17. The sword and stone will kill the God, but the God will not be killed. The silence will spread, and the banished will return. Chaos will reign, but the stone holds the key

    HURRAY FOR SEQUEL/THIRD BOOK SPOILERS!

    Post what you think that could mean! :3
     
    #197 cheesemuffin, Aug 26, 2011
  18. I'm guessing the banished are some badass bastards. And give me a clue.
     
    #198 Eagleking, Aug 26, 2011
  19. Hm...

    2 clues:

    The "SILENCE" (guess who?)
    The "banished" (those who are BANNED)
     
    #199 cheesemuffin, Aug 26, 2011
  20. Ok the silenced and banned will return and cause overall chaos and mayhem.
     
    #200 Eagleking, Aug 26, 2011
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