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[*OkamiAmaterasu (01)]

Really great chapter, as per usual.
The stone slab you put in at the end intrigues me... What significance could it have?
As I've said your writing style is very good. The story moves on with fluidity and I haven't discovered any spelling/grammar mistakes yet (that I can remember). Good job 

 

[cheesemuffin]

Turns out extreme sleep deprivation makes me write well...

Who'da thought?

Check out the new chapter, OR ELSE.

 

[Smighter89]

I already did. >:3 I loved it. Mostly the part where all the peaceful people died. And the trolls. Description=Forever 

 

[*IRONhulk (01)]

Just saying there should be a fanfic last stand

 

[cheesemuffin]

All in good time. Just wait.

 

[*IRONhulk (01)]

Cheese did you really just try to hit meh

 

[cheesemuffin]

Note to self: do not attack IRONhulk when I only have 300 units...

 

[Smighter89]

Lol.

 

[*IRONhulk (01)]



 

[*IRONhulk (01)]

Lol I'm in it I get to say news didn't realize I was there until I scanned it over again I feel happy.

 

[Eagleking]

I'm sure I've seen someone say Viva la revolution before. But who....

 

[Winters]

I <3 the way this story is going. The depiction of Shifter is pure genius xD

 

[*IRONhulk (01)]

Lol I'm considered a troll 




Good wriyin cheese smighter's discrption is awesome

 

[Storallelite]

More!! Make it longer

 

[Eagleking]

 Epic sauce!!!

 

[RenamedPhoenix]

You must add me!

:cry:


I can't believe I didn't sign up sooner.

 

[cheesemuffin]

The sword and stone will kill the God, but the God will not be killed. The silence will spread, and the banished will return. Chaos will reign, but the stone holds the key

HURRAY FOR SEQUEL/THIRD BOOK SPOILERS!

Post what you think that could mean! :3

 

[Eagleking]

I'm guessing the banished are some badass bastards. And give me a clue.

 

[cheesemuffin]

Hm...

2 clues:

The "SILENCE" (guess who?)
The "banished" (those who are BANNED)

 

[Eagleking]

Ok the silenced and banned will return and cause overall chaos and mayhem.