Revival of Heroes- Feedback and chat

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010.

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  1. Finished chapter, editing currently. Should post later tonight
     
    #41 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
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    #42 *Kimber03 (01), Nov 27, 2010
  3. Chapter up. the real adventure begins. Next chapter I estimate, up on Monday
     
    #43 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 27, 2010
  4. Yay
     
    #44 german_idiot, Nov 27, 2010
  5. LIKE I SAID INTRODUCE THE CHARACTERS b4 u start chapters
     
    #45 kaw_admin, Nov 28, 2010
  6. What that's stupid
     
    #46 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 28, 2010
  7. Soren doing that makes it very boring
    ex. Hi I'm Zack. I live in new york with my friends micky zaln Timmy Matt Andre mike etc.
    It's stale and doesn't interest anyone
     
    #47 german_idiot, Nov 28, 2010
  8. Everyone has their own style. For example I always manage to start my stories in the middle of some important scene.
     
    #48 *Kimber03 (01), Nov 28, 2010
  9. I always have the xharacter waking up
     
    #49 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 28, 2010
  10. Odd, haven't heard that before, but unique. 
     
    #50 *Kimber03 (01), Nov 28, 2010
  11. Or fleeing gives it mystery
     
    #51 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 28, 2010
  12. True
     
    #52 *Kimber03 (01), Nov 28, 2010
  13. I posted 2 Ch today. Did u read it?
     
    #53 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 28, 2010
  14. Yes but do I get left bhind since I'm on a bus
     
    #54 german_idiot, Nov 28, 2010
  15. Brb I'll read it now
     
    #55 *Kimber03 (01), Nov 28, 2010
  16. U will come in later to help Jake all characters do
     
    #56 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 28, 2010
  17. Thresh is the first to help then the helping characters rotate.
     
    #57 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 28, 2010
  18. Read it. A teensy bit confusing for me but I still liked it.
     
    #58 *Kimber03 (01), Nov 28, 2010
  19. How so?
     
    #59 TJ_Wolfsbane, Nov 28, 2010
  20. Now when u say rotate do u mean were on a revolving door......cause if we r screw this I wanna play with the swinging door
     
    #60 german_idiot, Nov 28, 2010
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