Relentless love feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Mr_Bluejay, Aug 15, 2010.

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  1. Wat a coincidence my names dani!!!!
     
    #21 *cupcake96 (01), Aug 15, 2010
  2. Lol
     
    #22 mattu, Aug 15, 2010
  3. Bump
     
    #23 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 16, 2010
  4. Bump cause it was great story good job
     
    #24 Cricken, Aug 16, 2010
  5. Hey thanks man
     
    #25 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 16, 2010
  6. Your welcome great story
     
    #26 Cricken, Aug 16, 2010
  7. So when he saw his dad combust and CONTROL fire he didn't freak the **** out???
     
    #27 xXDaMaGe-PXx, Aug 16, 2010
  8. Yes but thys wat he notices later it seemed completely normal like it was ment to be
     
    #28 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 16, 2010
  9. Cnt wait to c wat happens next
     
    #29 *cupcake96 (01), Aug 16, 2010
  10. WE HAVE THE NEXT FEW CHAP EDITED AND THEY WILL B OUT LATER TODAY
     
    #30 xXxRPL_I_AngusEmpire_l_RPLxXx, Aug 16, 2010
  11. Arimay 
     
    #31 Dark-Side, Aug 16, 2010
  12. Bump
     
    #32 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 16, 2010
  13. Bump
     
    #33 *cupcake96 (01), Aug 16, 2010
  14. Thanks babe
     
    #34 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 16, 2010
  15. Tis ok hun just keepin it up, especially as I ws kinda mean to ya earlier!!!!
     
    #35 *cupcake96 (01), Aug 16, 2010
  16. Bump
     
    #36 *cupcake96 (01), Aug 16, 2010
  17. OMG A BLACK RISE AGAINST T-SHIRT I LOVE THIS STORY ALREADYY 
     
    #37 Rise_against, Aug 16, 2010
  18. Lol
     
    #38 *cupcake96 (01), Aug 16, 2010
  19. Rise it's in there for u
     
    #39 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 16, 2010
  20. Bump
     
    #40 Mr_Bluejay, Aug 16, 2010
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