Poetry [MGTD]

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Dirty_LovelyDenial, May 17, 2015.

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  1. I can't find the SpongeBob rap god vine as a gif :cry:
     
    #121 Noodle, Sep 22, 2015
  2. Lol I know what you're talking about
     
    #122 Sweet_Pineapple, Sep 22, 2015
  3. I can sing like half of the fast part. Working on memorizing second half
     
    #123 Noodle, Sep 22, 2015
  4. Bump with my favorite.
     
    #124 Zethryr, Sep 22, 2015
  5. It's very forced rhyming. But I do like the last 2 lines, very nice.
     
    #125 Dirty_LovelyDenial, Sep 22, 2015
  6. To what has thou' done in this light?

    For he shan't enough at night?

    To what does he please to others?

    He is naught, not a mother or a father.



    His believes are sealed in his weak

    Her temptation is a joke to those who watch her sleep.

    This is the story of how they meet

    RedStar and Cella 2015
     
    #126 novus-marx, Sep 22, 2015
  7. Ich hab mir ein Hündchen gad pfiiffig und fein, das fängt mir dads häschen in Felde schön ein
     
    #127 Noodle, Sep 22, 2015
  8. English only, per ToU please :)
     
    #128 Dirty_LovelyDenial, Sep 23, 2015
  9. A voice was singing in Sunday choir
    Of all the ships that are lost at sea,
    Of all who wait in vein by the fire,
    Of all the souls that can't break free.
    The voice was rising silvery clear
    Gripping the hearts and making believe
    That ships were safe again by the pier,
    That tired souls were ready to leave..
    The voice was singing that love is undying...
    And hidden from eyes by the coat rack
    Blessed by Communion a child was crying
    That no one ever is coming back
     
    #129 One-BaDaSs_PaiN-In_Ur-AsS_LiLi, Sep 23, 2015
  10. No support
     
    #130 quigamalathedestroyer, Sep 23, 2015
  11. And thank u laVashe. Appreciate ur praise lol
     
    #131 One-BaDaSs_PaiN-In_Ur-AsS_LiLi, Sep 23, 2015
  12. Thankfully, your support is not needed. Nor is anyone else's. Not for this thread, or any poem posted in it.
     
    #132 Dirty_LovelyDenial, Sep 23, 2015
  13. Your support is now
    Required for this haiku
    To be made better.
     
    #133 -Narwhal, Sep 23, 2015
  14. Evidently first line has 4 syllables :lol:
     
    #134 Noodle, Sep 23, 2015
  15. None of it is against ToU I promise.
     
    #135 Noodle, Sep 23, 2015
  16. It has 5

    Your su-pport is now
     
    #136 Dirty_LovelyDenial, Sep 23, 2015
  17. ToU states English only for forums.
     
    #137 Dirty_LovelyDenial, Sep 23, 2015
  18. Not even I knew that!
     
    #138 Noodle, Sep 23, 2015
  19. Oh you're right I knew about support having two long I miscounted the amount of words
     
    #139 Noodle, Sep 23, 2015
  20. If it's a rule, I know it. I use it enough. Now, please try to keep it on topic :)
     
    #140 Dirty_LovelyDenial, Sep 23, 2015
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