Poems.

holy shingles! talk about a thread from the emo 5th dimension from hell. please, just stop.

 

sharpen your self harm blades silly emo's.

 

Goo awayyy

 

the forums would improve if you we're the one who went away

 

were*

 

What have I done? Nothing
You? You've insulted the writings of many trying to be a troll go back to active topics they like you there

 

I'm not a troll. sorry. I'm a literary critic. and if you're stuff sucks. I tell you. it's not too complicated is it?

 

your*

 

Not really a poem, just some lyrics. Here goes...

Im on the edge, i fear im falling down,
The world spins around me but makes no sound,
My cup is empty, spilled long ago,
It feels so different this time though,

Break me down, go all the way,
Let me drown again today,
Sing it to me, lest I forget,
miseries memory,

Empty inside just a shell of myself,
Show me how to escape this hell,
I dont feel anything anymore,
Time has taken its toll,
these chains bind my soul,

Go on just walk away,
Let me down another day,
Sing it to me, make me forget
miseries memory,

Its you, its the memory that paralizes me,
It burns deep down inside,
Anger pains i cant hide,

Go on just walk away,
Break me down again today,
Let me drown another day,
breathe into me, make me forget,
Sing it to me, miseries memory

 

some stuff belle has written had real potential. but your guys' stuff is ass

 

Well de_bo, i guess you'll be seeing me in your news feed, enjoy. Its called constructive criticism, google it, interesting stuff.

 

lol my news feed. oh no. pls hlp meh.

dude look, I've started playing kaw in 2009. haven't actually been active outside the forums in 2 years. and only recently came back to the forums after nearly a year away. you honestly think I give a flying **** what you're gonna do?

have at it big boy. make sure you have a tissue handy to clean up after you finish enjoying yourself.

 

I've got a whole truckload on standby.

 

good to know. just remember, your literal talent doesn't exist either. find a new hobby bro

 

^ this is kinda stupid, d_bo
If its not constructive criticism, then take it elsewhere. :/

 

I may have only been here for 4-5 months, but I haven't seen a single thing in forums that makes you look any more than a lowly arse hole.

 

thank you for your opinion amberclaw. now shut your face and get back to the kitchen.

 

Oh lol your so witty and terrifying dbo.

How 'bout YOU shut your over active pie-hole and go play in your cardboard box. Or have a long educated conversation with your pet rock about how everybody is trash compared to your royal highness.

Face it, he's the only one who cares about what you have to say. :roll: