Poems.

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by etak, Jul 20, 2011.

  1. Why not it's awsum and something u should be proud of
     
  2. Freedom

    Freedom is something you earn and cannot be taken away.with similar words spoken long ago, one nation under god shall live peacefully with little mountains to climb. Many lives were lost before and without the loss there will be no gain; in the future or now 

    -Val
     
  3. An introduction to a story I'm making called the Case of Murder
     
  4. If that is the title of a book tell me please it came to the top of my head
     
  5. I take full credit for bringing a new and amazing member to the fanfic community (Valkrie).



    At least I THINK I got you here when you made that poem 2 weeks back...
     
  6. LOL I wrote that freedom poem in April, English class after a test my mind just all of a sudden comes to something if I think about it I forget and my mind goes blank >.<
     
  7. This is a quick sort of poem that I made in five min:

    The bird twitches,
    Its back folded in the light of the starry moon,
    The legs prepare for the jump,
    It alights in the air,
    There is a KaW KaW! As the bird sees its prey,
    It's eyes gleam as it prepares for the kill,
    Its legs swooping down on the unsuspecting bird,
    Watching as its hapless victim struggles on its now red feet,
    A gurgle, no more, as the victim now slumps down in the grasp of the bird,
    The smell of a clean catch,
    As it swoops down to feed it's young,
    Their eyes brighten as they see their mother,
    Who feeds them,
    Month after month,
    This process repeats itself,
    Until the babies no longer need their mother,
    Now they prepare for their flight,
    To find their own home,
    And they alight!
     
  8. :D Thanks. It's the only poem I've made since 4th grade or something besides for a Haiku I made 5 or so months ago.
     
  9. Its just a simple four line poem Winning:

    Tremble with joy as they say your name
    Because for your life will never be the same
    Let the lights shine on you
    And hopefully one day the same will happen to you too
     
  10. It's very good my friend :p
     
  11. My first ever rhyming poem :D
     
  12. *and hopefully one day the same will happen to me too* sorry messed up there Dx
     
  13. Nice quick poem... Sounds like you like love poems ;)
     
  14. "...Sunlight filtering through the curtains,
    Showing what once was love,
    Now is eternity..."




    Lol
     
  15. Slide away

    Fingers locked a tenuous grip
    Hold your weapon tight
    The pattern holds though crystals slip
    It still refracts the light
    Sparring now for quite some time
    Not this far before
    The ancient bauble's kept its prime
    What has fate in store?
    Congealing blood dulls razor glints
    Alone again someday
    An oily baste atop the prints
    Afraid to slide away
    Within a box in murky moat
    A jail inside my skin
    An arm's broke free and reaching out
    For someone reaching in
     
  16. Poem of a jailbreak type off story?


    Nice, I like the rhyming.
     
  17. There is the sky
    This is where I'll fly
    Here's where I'll soar and forget the world
    Don't try and stop me
    Because once you see
    That I'm not who I seem
    You'll have your mouth open with shock

    -Val