poem/rap

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Social_Darwinism, Nov 28, 2014.

  1. "I hear u niggers talking, flaunting ur **** like your walking, I heard the word on the street, the king David got beat, and his crew hit breeze, to put his mind at ease.

    It's like NFL all over again, front, back, front, back, i backhand u smack, u talk whack, and deserve another crack. I heard u ordered my ****, yeah? Give it back!

    I mean bro I used to be a fan of yours, until u started mess'n wit whores, I guess **** hit the fan, and none like ur style, u probably waltz around like a pedophile, smok'n weed, as u get on ur knees to plead, I'll punch u up till u bleed.
    I know where u live, with ur mother and father, and ur future lover, I heard she got on the top of the music cover.
    I meant to ask, how she going? How's **** flowing? Well apparently the riffs hit the street, better cut off their leadership feet, he talks to much ****, he deserves a hit, I'll run by his house, he'll run like a mouse, and I'll drop the fucker, he'll runs west, for the ***** club fest, I've heard to much ****.

    Flip, flip, flipping the lighter, suddenly the **** gets fire, ur a goddamn *****, damn I saw ur post 'Hitman for hire', u probably rock up picking bitches up, liar. We knew u were gay, because u never seemed to play, flowers and lovers where ur dream, mixed ur sister up like cream, I got her so hard she was practically steam, well ur a faggot as it seems"

    Bad at rapping (way better freestyle)(try'n take mind off stuff happen today)
     
  2. This poem is for you and me your angle eyes can always see the good in me but that devil smile makes me weary of what could and couldn't be
     
  3. As I sit here thinking of what's to be nothing good ever comes to me only vale and hate accompanies me down this long and lonely road no one walks beside me only beating me down saying my dreams will never be will you also beat on me
     
  4. Don't quit ur day job
    Punctuation a big word for a few . . .'s
     
  5. Ok Ty for your input always welcome
     
  6. Thread doesn't ask for support or not are you lost
     
  7. I'm the one and only king of this rap game y'all siblings because ya nothing but mah children
     
  8. No support
     
  9. Be king I don't rap it's poem I wright on the go when I think of them. so take rap it's all yours
     
  10. Nice job op and the others that commented, a bit sad but good nonetheless, I guess you are good for something other than kaw :p
     
  11. Ty but for me it's not a sad thing it's a way to vent about the past and present gets a lot off your chest it's almost like going to a happy place
     
  12. I understand, and you do you bro dont let others tell you diff, just know not everyone sees everything the same way
     
  13. You're a poet and I didn't even know it. 
     
  14. Idk anything about poetry or rap, but I know a little bit about personal issues.. And you, sir, might wanna seek counsel from a professional therapist. :) let him/her build you back up.
     
  15. I know about therapy, it helps. Having an artistic hobby is the best way to vent imo though. I drum a lot more when I'm mad or upset, or when I'm happy. I drum a lot, and this went from serious to random fast.
     
  16. In the beginning
    this game was about war
    Big guys were winning
    Little guys ass was sore
    As the game developed
    And new features came to light
    Some have adjusted
    Others find the game shite
    But for years I've been playing
    And I can't put down my phone
    Ravens For Life is the clan
    The clan I call my home