"Penance"

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Static, Sep 5, 2015.

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  1. You should seek commercial endorsements from Tampax!! It made me feel like I was starting a menstrual cycle.
     
    #21 Muskegon, Sep 6, 2015
  2. I hereby request the Topest of keks!
     
    #22 Zethryr, Sep 6, 2015
  3. Static also has killer bars
     
    #23 idontevenwar, Sep 6, 2015
  4. So, I started reading this..and started over imagining it was Mike Shinoda spitting a flow.


    Good stuff, OP. I've been a prisoner of love for almost 16 years now. I've embraced it.


    She has several different trophies of me on her dresser. I earn one every time I can.


    #studlywondernuts
     
    #24 -WillyTheDeuce-, Sep 6, 2015
  5. haha bro. Not bad being a prisoner of a positive love! Good to hear things like that.
     
    #25 Static, Sep 6, 2015
  6. Yes. This has a very Mike Shinoda type vibe to it.
     
    #26 Zethryr, Sep 6, 2015
  7. Always writes a good poem - way to go
     
    #27 firefall03, Sep 6, 2015
  8. Very nice
     
    #28 _Doodle_______, Sep 7, 2015
  9. Thanks guys. So hard to get published these days. Damn you internet!
     
    #29 Static, Sep 9, 2015
  10. Don't give up your day job
     
    #30 BuckWheatLovesCreamedCorn, Sep 9, 2015
  11. Dude you can't help but spew trash from your pie hole can you.

    Nice job op
     
    #31 kateian, Sep 9, 2015
  12. Since when is it Paw ?






































































    Poems At War
     
    #32 *Allie234112 (01), Sep 16, 2015
  13. nice poem. its good to know that on a fighting game there are fighters and lovers
     
    #33 LunarKat81, Sep 16, 2015
  14. haha it is what it was. Ima write, regardless. :)
     
    #34 Static, Sep 19, 2015
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