yes you do need to be low land bc @ wolf I think this one goes into more detail and easier to find as the title states what it is and the one you are talking about I believe is in a guide and u need to click the link
and no offence sexwulf i think this one is better only cuz its in more detail the only thing with yours is the pictures dont get me wrong yours is good but short. but thats just my opinon
You should change the size for some of the fonts. Keep the subject lines the same color, the body of each paragraph the same color, adding professionalism. Keep the same colors throughout, not a rainbow from top to bottom.