As an answer to most of the questions, a lot of this is summed up near the end, and there's a lot more descriptions in the later chapters. However, thanks for your feedback, I will take it into account.
Holy crap.... This is by far the only fanfic... I have read to date.... That I can truly say is decent.... Wow I actually read more then the first sentence. Professionally speaking, there are alot of full fan fic, which in honesty never rly make much sense.
Check out mine later will ya XD, I post one every so day, out of sheer boredom so take a look, when I do at you liseuire