Operation Storm Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Bastion, Jul 6, 2010.

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  1. I'm back, and story will now be continued.
     
    #161 Bastion, Jul 14, 2010
  2. Yay
     
    #162 mathew057, Jul 15, 2010
  3. Haha lol mat thanks
     
    #163 Bastion, Jul 15, 2010
  4. **UPDATE** Chap 6 is up
     
    #164 Bastion, Jul 18, 2010
  5. Nice ch bastoin
     
    #165 mathew057, Jul 18, 2010
  6. Thanks didn't have a lot of time to work on it :)
     
    #166 Bastion, Jul 18, 2010
  7. **UPDATE** chapter seven FINALLY up
     
    #167 Bastion, Aug 17, 2010
  8. You know you can change the name of my character to something better if you want.
     
    #168 osterly, Aug 17, 2010
  9. never!!!
     
    #169 Bastion, Aug 17, 2010
  10. Ummmmm..... Ok then.
     
    #170 osterly, Aug 17, 2010
  11. It's a good story though. Short but sweet chapters.
     
    #171 osterly, Aug 17, 2010
  12. Thank you. :p
     
    #172 Bastion, Aug 17, 2010
  13. SpecOps use M4's not MP5's. Chapters 4 & 5 were unbearable. A katana is not only an impractical weapon, there is no reason a special forces soldier would use it. Despite nitpicky stuff like that it's good.
     
    #173 *Gen_Spartan (01), Aug 17, 2010
  14. Thanks...I think.

    Gods Ninja requested to be a ninja, and a wepaon listed was a katana, so I figured I'd throw it in. And I've seen MP5's used in spec op movies but I'm not a huge spec ops buff
     
    #174 Bastion, Aug 17, 2010
  15. Sorry for being nitpicky about small details. It was good but my jack***ery made it sound like I hated it.
     
    #175 *Gen_Spartan (01), Aug 17, 2010
  16. Well thanks man :)
     
    #176 Bastion, Aug 17, 2010
  17. **UPDATE** Chap 8 up!
     
    #177 Bastion, Aug 18, 2010
  18. I die?!
     
    #178 *mcGreen (01), Aug 18, 2010
  19. Maybe :x Your shot for sure tho
     
    #179 Bastion, Aug 18, 2010
  20. Im Not your friend anymore!!!!











    Jk
     
    #180 *mcGreen (01), Aug 18, 2010
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