Operation Storm Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Bastion, Jul 6, 2010.

  1. He was halfway out the window. The dagger was halfway pressed into his throat. How is it possible to do both?
     
  2. I'm waiting for my part in this story, lol
     
  3. WTF?!?!?!?
     
  4. Sorry sorry, Rika is NOT in the story yet.I have to go back and fix that.
     
  5. Omai. So your story was a teaser?
     
  6. What? You come in later. I'm sorry!
     
  7. Tis fine. I'll just kill you at a later time... >:3
     
  8. :-o We'll see.
     
  9. Well it's simple bast if it's a two story building or higher then he'll be on the ground and the guy would be able to shoot him from there AND there is always the option of backup since there's three people... What is this guy, an Olympic runner or something? special ops would take him out
     
  10. There are hundreds of soldiers out there. They would be running into them. No one saw them go in it was a stealth mission.
     
  11. It would be hilarious if mrgreen completely misses rika and zaln dies anyway though
     
  12. Details details
     
  13. Why are all those guy there anyways? And if there's so many people then just bomb the crap out of them
     
  14. Lol
    don't blame my Shooting skillz
     
  15. Well I mean this story is so inaccurate if you think about it. You have a shotgun for crying out loud if you shoot rika there a good possibility that zaln will be hit too
     
  16. I'm not trying to ruin the story but i mean cmon
     
  17. You can Shot normal bullets with a shotgun too
     
  18. Because their are innocents too....its like a city....

    And what saint?