Operation Storm Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Bastion, Jul 6, 2010.

  1. Don't complain, I've allready had my guts spilt
     
  2. I just read it. I was grinning all the way 
     
  3. Is that good? '-.-
     
  4. Whoo! Thanks bro, means a lot. My first kaw story
     
  5. It was pretty good, I'm still sad about me getting sliced open though, lol
     
  6. You are still alive tho manjust hurt
     
  7. Awezum! Luv vit!

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  8. **UPDATE** Chap 9 up...kinda short tho its okay its dramatic
     
  9. Heyy, it's back! Great chapter, Bastion.
     
  10. :p Yeah was going to make it linger, but it seemed a good way to end it
     
  11. Sweet job man
     
  12. :-D good job, you're really good at this. You just need more chapters, haha.
     
  13. Don't worry, I didn't know either, haha.
     
  14. So i was undercover-undercover? So Bad Ass undercover that don't Even i knew that i worked for you?
     
  15. You were never an undercover for the good guys, just NRA the whole time. Is it really that confusing?
     
  16. I get it...I think
     
  17. It's confusing how we don't even know what we know, haha
     
  18. Now that's confusing