No Longer Human: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Aug 13, 2010.

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  1. lol!

    Great Chapter gloomi!
     
    #121 *Irin (01), Sep 9, 2010
  2. I love it, where's dyonn tho?
     
    #122 detroit-lions-fan, Sep 9, 2010
  3. This is a terrible story!
     
    #123 *Symphoney (01), Sep 9, 2010
  4. 
    that's not nice
     
    #124 german_idiot, Sep 9, 2010
  5. Lol! :) Jk I love it
     
    #125 *Symphoney (01), Sep 9, 2010
  6. Chapter 16... I want this story to end! 
     
    #126 *iPimella (01), Sep 13, 2010
  7. y it's soooo awesome!
     
    #127 CrayzJayz, Sep 13, 2010
  8. Ty  i know the ending, but it's going to take a couple more chapters to get there 
     
    #128 *iPimella (01), Sep 13, 2010
  9. Sweet story!
     
    #129 *Spottedleaf2 (01), Sep 13, 2010
  10. Ty 
     
    #130 *iPimella (01), Sep 13, 2010
  11. MAKE MORE OR SEYMOR GETS ANGRY  (hehehe he's gonna shoot ya then blow u up....but only if u don't write more)
     
    #131 german_idiot, Sep 14, 2010
  12. Where are the others like dyonn ect. Like they pop up n then their gone
     
    #132 detroit-lions-fan, Sep 15, 2010
  13. Well there's so many of them I can't real fir them in to the story. That's really the only way this all can work.
     
    #133 *iPimella (01), Sep 15, 2010
  14. The end is posted 
     
    #134 *iPimella (01), Sep 15, 2010
  15. (chapter 17,18)
    Post if you want me to write a prologue
     
    #135 *iPimella (01), Sep 15, 2010
  16. Aww I didn't like that ending
     
    #136 CrayzJayz, Sep 15, 2010
  17. Not 1 bit
     
    #137 CrayzJayz, Sep 15, 2010
  18. Lolz and why not? It's extremely realistic...
     
    #138 *iPimella (01), Sep 16, 2010
  19. Yea but it mean to da nice funny colored pplz
     
    #139 CrayzJayz, Sep 16, 2010
  20. Prologue one and two UP!
     
    #140 *iPimella (01), Sep 22, 2010
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