No Longer Human: Feedback

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *iPimella (01), Aug 13, 2010.

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  1. I will be posting again sometime this week! Thank you all for your support and constructive criticism
     
    #101 *iPimella (01), Sep 1, 2010
  2. Chapter 12 is UP!
     
    #102 *iPimella (01), Sep 3, 2010
  3. Amazing, Gloomi! I can't wait for the next part!
     
    #103 *Irin (01), Sep 3, 2010
  4. I love it!!!
     
    #104 german_idiot, Sep 3, 2010
  5. When r the the next chapters coming
     
    #105 german_idiot, Sep 3, 2010
  6. I love it
     
    #106 *Symphoney (01), Sep 4, 2010
  7. Ty  chapter 13 and maybe 14 will be up sometime tomorrow
     
    #107 *iPimella (01), Sep 5, 2010
  8. Chapters 13 and 14 up! 14 is a flashback, just warning you
     
    #108 *iPimella (01), Sep 7, 2010
  9. Your writing is Brilliant! I love it!
     
    #109 *Irin (01), Sep 7, 2010
  10. I like it almost as much as pie...and I really like pie
     
    #110 german_idiot, Sep 7, 2010
  11. Lolz
     
    #111 *iPimella (01), Sep 7, 2010
  12. 
     
    #112 german_idiot, Sep 8, 2010
  13. Yo peeps,I'm colliyo yo
     
    #113 *Symphoney (01), Sep 8, 2010
  14. So that means if I read thus book then it's cool
     
    #114 *Symphoney (01), Sep 8, 2010
  15. Yo
     
    #115 *Symphoney (01), Sep 8, 2010
  16. Chapter 15 is up.
     
    #116 *iPimella (01), Sep 9, 2010
  17. Woohoo!! I like it (but where did Matt go?)
     
    #117 german_idiot, Sep 9, 2010
  18. I'm sorry I have so many characters that I can't get them all in  i guarantee that he will show up again.
     
    #118 *iPimella (01), Sep 9, 2010
  19. YEEEEEH (I'm happy cause he'll b back AND cause I got a peice of pie. DOUBLE WIN)
     
    #119 german_idiot, Sep 9, 2010
  20.  the cake is a lie
     
    #120 *iPimella (01), Sep 9, 2010
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